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Read MoreGod fearing patriots radicalisedRight in front of American eyes.Empowered with weaponsFaces covered by masksTo do the biddingThe orange man asks.So why aren't they terroristsAnd called to accountFor the clear acts of terrorThey continully mountIt's been done before way back in...
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Thank you.
I didn’t put much into it so appreciate your kind remarks.
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Preach on from the land down under. Great work Peter.
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Powerful piece. It’s always important to know history and seeing how that turned out. I think after this administration is done, we’ll have trials and there we’ll find out more of the evil that men/women did. My heart goes out to those broken families and protesters voicing for the voiceless.
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I appreciate the effort, Peter — but I don’t much care for the AI voice reading it when the “LISTEN” voice is clicked. How many pages do you have that on?
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Read MoreMy father wrote this for my mum.Ive always loved the simplicity of it and thought it was worth sharing.
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He wrote that? It’s really good.
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As far as I know he wrote it.
He was a Doctor of Philosophy so surely he wouldn’t lie to his son.
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Dear P,
I really appreciated dreaminess of this piece. It has a great meter and I liked the plot twist at the end. It reminds me no matter what we are in life there’s a poet in all of us. Lovely share. H🌷
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Thanks for the kind reply Honoria
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I’m loving that this was captured so honestly and with simplicity that makes it very special. Thank you for sharing. Those are treasures that must be kept in the family for a long long time.
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Read MoreBiden calls it values.The missile is indifferent.The end justifies the means. Trump calls it winning.Facts are negotiable.The end justifies the means. Putin calls it history.Graves are future tense.The end justifies the means. Xi calls it harmony.Silence is compliance.The end justifies the means. Netanyahu...
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Very good. I just read that Musk said that death is faulty design and in the future we will figure out how to fix it.
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Thanks Fia.
Don’t normally agree with Elon but he is right that death will be eventually defeated by science but probably only for the rich.
You wouldn’t want the poor living forever now ..would you.
Seriously,who really wants to live forever..not me.
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe bed thumps rhythmically beneath you while youmake a grocery listand notice the weirdwater stain by the edge of the ceiling fanthe pace increases soyou stifle a half-assed moan and tilt your pelvis and wonderis thisis this…and you wait...
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian, I appreciate you right back.
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Oh-Wow! I absolutely loved this, Betty. Best wishes, Harriet-Jacqui Furl, published erotica author
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Thank you HJ. Back atcha!
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Betty love your writes. Wooo
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Thank you my sweet friend.
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Your pieces are always so stimulating Lady, to tight
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Hey ME!
It is tight as hell, my friend! (Kegals doncha know.)
Thanks my friend. Good to see you.
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What! Betty graces us with some creative writing here! Or, also known as Lillith has entered Eden! What!
“forearm against your pelvis” = Details are everything, and this is exquisitely precise to make it a real moment. That bit of control is boss!
Well you had mentioned that you were going to concentrate on erotica. So that explains this humdinger of a write!
The way you make it so realistic, without any overly porn promotion, shows your skill, ahem, at creative writing.
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My sweet, innocent brother-from-another-mother.
No, this was just some older stuff dusted off.
I have yet to write the porn.
It’s gonna be like a Gallagher show, you’ll need visqueen sheeting to avoid the splash zone.
JUST KIDDING…
MaybeHey, bro, thanks. I fucking adore you. Your critique matters and I really appreciate you for it. Thank you for being a fucking icon.
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Icon? Don’t be calling me no foreign little car made by Hundai !! I’m tall dammit!
Okay okay.
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Gotta love the raw honesty spilling onto the page without restraint. “Are those your toes curling in the sheets?” it’s that damn good.
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LOL, thanks Wally. I appreciate you!
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Thank you for sharing this Peter. I’m not sure it needs another person’s ink. The raw emotion you put into this really hits home.