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Read MoreShe came up behind me as I was taking off my makeup, and wrapped her arms around my waist. “Vienes a la cama, Amor?” Are you coming to bed, love? I smiled and closed my eyes. She didn’t initiate often, but fuck. Just...
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Thanks Peter, it’s the fucking best.
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent storytelling per usual really love the layers in your writes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. It’s so much harder for me to write this narrative voice, and I appreciate that you foind nuance.
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Stinking, reeking, sweating womanly sex – so hot my knees are trembling!
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Mine were too. WLW smells like gardenias and jasmine… fucking glorious shit.
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Gardenias and Jasmine! Aren’t you the lucky one, girl?! Cherish the moment! Harriet-Jacqui Furl writing as HJ Furl on Amazon.
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Why, why did this have to end? lol I know life continues but this is hot.
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I mean, we had to work. 🙂
When it was one of THOSE nights with the one who got away, it feels like it never ends… god above… it feels like eternity in every steaming breath. Smooth skin and soft breasts and held-breath cries… yeah. It feels forever.
Thanks for dropping in Fia and supporting me. I don’t know what I’m doing right now, but I’m appreciative to have space to stretch my fingers and figure it out.
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You are welcome to do that here. Betty
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What the hell?! You literally described Del. And in another subliminal way that I noticed, because I’m kinda like rain man sometimes. LOL. So what if I’m quirky!
BTW, if I was a female, I’d be lesbian. I get it.
Your erotica is intense and not pornish. That is because you are a skilled writer!
I’m still waiting for more of your heady writes. But I know you’re on a purge. So have at it. Thankfully you’re good at all subject matter.-
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Bro, when I said I’d fucking take your woman from you if you were an asshole? I MEANT it. I’d totally steal your woman from you. (She’s hot!)
Thanks. The intimacy is so, so different, and structuring it in a way that was less textbook and more opera is still challenging. I might write for my gay half for a while. (My straight half has had the shit kicked out of it for some years.)
I don’t know what’s next as Betty. I don’t know if she has much left in the way of heady writing. We shall see.
Love you bro. I mean, really. (Be good to your girl or else!)
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She is incredible. So I’m not an asshole just for her! LOL.
“Betty” needs to celebrate being Betty across a few topics, etc. You have a very human way with words that everyone can relate to, and wish that they themselves had the inner voice to get down in words. So embrace it all. You are very well rounded.
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Really love the go between you and Styxian, great commenting. The piece can’t be denied for it’s steaminess, it’s like watching a flick, tight
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Styx is seriously my brother-from-another-mother. Glad you dug it my friend. Really glad.
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Read MoreMy world grows smaller now,not through accident or fate,but through the quiet pruningof my own choices.Roads I might have takenfall back into the mist.Rooms I used to fill with noisestand empty and at rest.Yet as this world contracts,something in...
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This is a thought-provoking piece.
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Thanks Fia….
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A quiet, stoic acceptance. Letting go takes real strength. I am beginning to learn myself. Thank you.
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Read MoreYou sat on the couch, absorbed in something when I slithered onto your lap, wearing just a sundress. I wriggled around and plucked at your shirt, avoiding eye contact, and blushing a little. So, you knew. “You get cute when you’re...
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You are really good at short story writing. You caught the attention and kept raising the stakes. Oh man its good.
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Thank you sweet Fia. Just stretching the fingers to see where they end … I appreciate you providing a venue for that exploration.
Thanks again for the kind feedback!
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Passionately penned, Betty. Amazing storytelling my friend. This write is also hotter than two demons fucking! lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Two demons fucking sounds pretty hot. (Are their wieners pronged like their tongues? WHAT?! OMG!)
Hey friend, I also appreciate you. Rock on Damian.
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Hot Erotica Star! xx
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Thank you my friend!
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You’re truly welcome, Betty. I’m published 8x over on Amazon, and I can truly say there are 2 blends of sex and erotica out there: filthy dirty sweary red hot (check out My Pregnant Pause and Joely’s Swim LIVE here) and you write that brilliantly!!! Or there’s the subtler, less crude erotica – like my BEINGS – which sells more and got 5-star amazon reviews from women readers. Might be worth you experimenting? HJ Furl xx
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Read MoreCome closer,listen.I need you to hear this.The world is at war.I know it is so,because truth was the first to fall.Fact has become fiction,fiction turned to fact.Seeing is no longer believing,and truth no longer matters.Everything is fake,everything a conspiracy,everything...
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I think the button has already been pressed … nice one
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Spot on in fact. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Spot on..you nailed it..it’s here and most of us are in denial..great write
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Thanks for reading guys….you already knew the war had started….
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Some things are just crying out to be written down and shouted out loud .. This is just one such thing .. I couldn’t agree more sir .. maybe we should form a cult or summat .. Neville 👍
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Shout it, say it quietly, repeatedly. No means NO. I loved every line. I’ll be sure to check out your catalogue.
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Based on this artiusing piece, I think in my next life I’d like to be a woman.
Great write.
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