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Read MoreBeneath Emerald Canopies:Her Song, His Heart1 My ecotourism is done on a shoestring via an airfare war on a flight to central Africa where my backpacking odyssey into Rwanda takes me into a thatched roof region of the soul....
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Damian, thank you from my heart and soul. Very glad you enjoyed reading this tonight. Really appreciated your words here on my story. Made my night. Appreciate you too.
John
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I am so overjoyed my friend by your words on my story. You have made my morning something altogether special. Truly appreciate your reading my story my friend. Thank you from my heart and soul.
John
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I am so overjoyed my friend by your words on my story. You have made my morning something altogether special. Truly appreciate your reading my story my friend. Thank you from my heart and soul.
John
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LOL!!! I forgot to use the reply first time so reposted with the reply so you’d be able to see. Didn’t see a way to delete the first post.
John
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LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Drieks and
Damian DeadLove are now friends
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Read MoreIt's crowded in here overstuffed ego darkness with no light switch future decorated in fear I just want to be outside Outside is the mountains, caring nothing of my undulating moods Outside is the roar of the ocean drowning the useless wails of my boo hoo self esteem Outside is the infinite, unlimited...
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If that picture is your outside… then please kill me with you
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Thanks! Being inside oneself too much is crushing too.
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Pink, being outside is the best medicine. Your poem is so vivid with the pining of the outside written in lines that have incredible clarity and convey your feelings perfectly. Enjoyed reading this tonight.
John
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Read MoreI have grieved your absence longer than I've enjoyed your presence Yet every detail of your essence is meticulously engraved in each cell of my body.Our connection is so strong , I still feel the flow of your soul through...
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Pain is a universal emotion to be cherished.
A language we feel, yet speak not one word of.It’s beautiful really.
Just like your words.
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We learn a lot from pain and suffering.
Thank you for your kind comment! ⚘️
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Beautifully penned, Jade. A nice read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ⚘️
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Pain is physical….. suffering is mental.
Let suffering go, not easy, but you’re the one hurting yourself.
Very powerfully and intelligently crafted piece.🙏
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You are correct, pain eventually goes away. Suffering can take a lifetime to heal…
Thank you for the comment Peter ⚘️
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(check spelling on ‘through’ 3rd sentence)
So, the first line of this poem is captivating and sets the tone. It could almost be a poem unto itself. I like how you explore this relationship for the reader, the feelings and dissolved expectations… the emptiness left and the questions we never want to be answered.
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Haha you can tell my first language isn’t English. I will correct that…
Thank you for the comments.⚘️
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Thank you kindly for the comment, I just was able to let go, after 10 years….🫣⚘️
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Cheers! 😅
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Read MoreWhy does a world without you bring up feelings and thoughts i long to? Escape from your grip in the slightest sense of it gives hope for happiness so i’ll make sure of it. You can beat me senseless...
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Thank you Adira. I hope it reached her in some way as well.
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You’re a talented storyteller, John. Great read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian