I love the second Stanza.

so lovely dearest Daniel I love the juxtaposition of the raven and angel wings 💕

Beautifully penned, Daniel. Another amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I sincerely wish the bookmark worked for me, but try as I might it doesn’t. This will be permanently bookmarked in my mind though

hello dearest Benny I guess I love our terrible creator because he is terrible like me of me like him…he never leaves me alone though the godly people abandones me right away… you can only do your best and life isn’t a fairy tale I get it with the memories 💕 great write…

I wouldn’t mind if we did away with platitudes altogether. It’s entirely too easy for people to quote one of them at you without really thinking of any sort of meaningful response that might better fit the situation.

“Love & light” or “positive vibes only” also come to mind. Toxic positivity is a real issue….people have to be able to grieve, to get frustrated and angry and complain on occasion. These are unpleasant things that all humans must experience.

One of my least favorite to hear is “be yourself”, which too often means “confirm my biased opinions of you”.

“the herd mentality for us is obscene” love this line. Great piece

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

powerful write lovely poetess 💕

Wow! I thoroughly, thoroughly enjoyed this pose Paula. It’s new, fresh, and edgy. Thanks for sharing.
Jackie 👍🏻

Lol i meant to write Prose❤️

666 baby. Always & forever! xxx

Thanks everyone.

Even though this is not finished, it packs a punch. Very good you two

Thanks!