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Read MoreHow can I competeShe had trained you for her desiresShe tells you to count before you beginYou take deep breaths, trembling You either fear heror you desire her Lust or disgustRides you hard She tells you she wants you to play something...
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Thank you, Jacob ;))
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Fia….I thought it was more about a femdom sorta thing….still good either way.👍
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Haha..well you never know when I could pop a poem like that out. Thank you, Peter;))
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I just can’t imagine any hot blooded music loving fella NOT enjoying this & DEEPLY .. Bravo Mistress F .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, Neville.(big smile here);))
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excellent write
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Thank you, twoffthythree ;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Music is a seductive lady, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;)) Music is exactly that,
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Fia this was smoking. I love piano music and this is one of the most creative poems on seduction of a pianist I have read. I felt the flame of his helplessness because her womanly powers. Sizzling.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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Our moment is ongoing my dear.
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Yes it is.
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∞
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Stick with it, I’ve learned. Eventually one will work out, but sometimes it can be a struggle.
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Yes I agree with you.
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Read MorePoison left her lips "it's you that I detest"His mouth bent towards his chest.He died,Was for the best.
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There is a great pain in words
And there is also joy.A really moving piece.
Regards James
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Emily Dickinson once said “Words have the power to kill, they also have the power to heal.”
And here it is the former that occurs.
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There is nothing quite like the sting of harsh well placed words. We humans can make weapons out of everything. Still, an ugly truth is less harmful than a pretty lie. Excellent write!
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Given the state of the world, there are consequences to actions.
Nice spill.
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Read MoreThey say his name was Death.Was it a he or a she?Does it even matter to me? He wears a black cloak like the skies.When the stars shine and suffice.He holds a scythe he uses well. To reap souls into the...
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Read MoreI had time to give it some thoughtjust who the fuck I think I amsuddenly the floodgates stoppedthe sky opened upand I could see the lightI'm sent to bring sexy back to insanitywhile having critics talk shit about meyou...
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I’m a mad, mad man… that is catchy.
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Well like the great philosopher Popeye once said “I Yam What I Yam” haha.
Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.
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I love this piece. You create an excellent and interesting metaphor and you carry it through from beginning to end.
It really works and we feel the relationship between the poem’s subject and the piano.
nicely done, Fia.
j.