You crafted this scene perfectly. And that last line was brilliant as the flame from that candle.

John

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story, my friend. Much obliged, for your compliment. I just never considered myself funny, all though maybe I’m funnier when I write, it would explain why some jokes bomb when I’m talking. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

Love this! You write like a modern day Kerouac who has been in his scene and can put it down in colorful and engaging words. Truly loved reading this. It gave me a smile and painted my evening with a scene I loved seeing through your words.

John