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Read MoreThe body rests, but the theater continues.The curtain of sleep closes,and behind it, the stage remains lit.The dream does not bow to fatigue,does not bend to biology,does not dissolve in the chemistry of melatonin.It is something else.It is the...
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Thank you, I try my best to invite everyone into my poetic adventures in PARland. 😎
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Wow… like this
” Sleep is a gesture,
a ritual of disconnection,
but the dream is the saboteur of silence.”
Enjoyed this poem Par-
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Sending my love to you.
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! Riveting imagery, written as only you can my friend. Simply amazing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sending my love to you, dear friend.
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Inspiring, transcending, mesmerizing, infinite. I’m hooked. PARland sounds mind blowing.
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We must keep on acting to feed reality with our half-dreams.
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The liquid form is the most adaptable and dangerous of all, so we must keep our emotional liquidity under surveillance.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group News and Suggestions
Attention Stars Right Family:
I hadn’t anticipated needing to return so soon to address this, but it’s necessary to clarify—once again—what this platform will and will not tolerate. To ensure we are all on the same page, please read the following carefully.
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Read MoreThe Three C’s of StarsRiteCommunity, Comradery, and CommentsWriting, putting the work in & finally posting so others can read it can be a bit unnerving. One of the goals of StarsRite is to become a community that communicates!Poetry is...
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Fia,
Hmmm. Just curious, Fia, are you an administrator here in Stars?
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Yes, I have partnered up with Stars Rite.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group News and Suggestions
This is a shortcut for those who want to change their work completely but will have to wait 24 hours before they can post again.
DON’T DELETE!
Go to the dashboard and go to the work you want to remove. Use the pen and go to the body of the work, remove it, and insert new work. Change the title and tags if you need to.
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Read MoreHow can I competeShe had trained you for her desiresShe tells you to count before you beginYou take deep breaths, trembling You either fear heror you desire her Lust or disgustRides you hard She tells you she wants you to play something...
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I love this piece. You create an excellent and interesting metaphor and you carry it through from beginning to end.
It really works and we feel the relationship between the poem’s subject and the piano.
nicely done, Fia.
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Thank you, Jacob ;))
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Fia….I thought it was more about a femdom sorta thing….still good either way.👍
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Haha..well you never know when I could pop a poem like that out. Thank you, Peter;))
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I just can’t imagine any hot blooded music loving fella NOT enjoying this & DEEPLY .. Bravo Mistress F .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, Neville.(big smile here);))
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excellent write
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Thank you, twoffthythree ;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Music is a seductive lady, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;)) Music is exactly that,
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Fia this was smoking. I love piano music and this is one of the most creative poems on seduction of a pianist I have read. I felt the flame of his helplessness because her womanly powers. Sizzling.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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“Liquid childhood” interesting what that conjured up for this reader.
I rarely remember dreams anymore and they are never about the past anymore…used to be. But now they are of some unnamed future and often I don’t even recognize me in the dreams…
At my older age, I surrender to sleep and let it do whatever it wants with me.
Really good write here PAR. You bring us along with you, but not just as observers, more like participants.
j.