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    Crash Test Dummy

    3rd Rock from the Sun .... burned beyond recognition .........crashed landed.... Spiritually branded   Enchanted by that   ...infernal Genie in a Bottle Gaslit from Day One...de-deuced from Adamant  ....,,,to just a damned ant...   Panting...ranting...in past tense .... full of pre-tense   Full of Shit...   ...a Facsimile therein of...trying to catfish...His own...

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    • Brilliantly penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend. Dig the layers in this one it’s a hard hitting powerhouse that’s spitting facts. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Oh, I am glad I discovered this (not for all, but for me) and I must ask you this: have you made any audios of your work? this is only the second one of your works I have read, and it begs the be heard. I must say I’m a bit prejudiced in that, being one who comes from that stable, but this really would be even more impressive aloud. Nice work, sir.

      • I haven’t done any audits yet but will be in the near future. Thx for the positive vibes, FD.

        Much respect

        Naaj

        • If you do, let me know; we have a Spoken Word category here now and a lot of us are building a library, of sorts, of diverse works. Check it out; there are some excellent pieces there.

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    queries

    darkening temper fragile of faithcontemplating the dour side of lifewhen in my solutide ponderthe cruelty befallen mepleasure attribed by troubling mewith a question for the Gods whythere is great compassion and love, I knowmy mind ponders the why of...

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  • The Obvious

    And finally, you did the obvious.You cut your nails.You did things so seemingly without meaning. And yet, as you swept away the dustfrom one gesture to the next,you opened a tiny crack.Almost nothing, almost a laughthrough which an ancient wind...

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    never was

    syncronicity of faith I am dreamingfate will bless my lovea deep seeded needbleeding colors of lustwhite audacity juxtapose with crimsonmy hunger growl and my passion showmy innocence blush and I was takenin the throes of ecstasy I found myself...

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    • Chère C.,
      How can you be so productive and, at the same time, be so consistent in quality?
      Looks like I enjoy everything you write.
      Just a note from the far away fanclub.
      Warm regards, Gus

    • Aww, no sad bittersweet stuff!
      Okay, this is good and it hits the heart in the center. I feel it, through your words.
      Have some great holidays Crims!

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • This write has a gentle sting to it.
      You do both so well. Gentle and sting.
      I love when you blend Brenda.
      Just the right amount of bittersweet.

      Merry Christmas!

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    understanding

    laughter of hate, inside me debating whether to stay or leavecallous affection is the affliction, as of latemorose of feeling, with lust shown for others and for me nonededicated need holds me to youa love that hurts dictates desireinside...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Heartfelt write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Chère C.,
      A thumbs up from the Netherlands.
      And what do the world famous Macs says?
      I’m loving it.
      Your writes I mean. I’m not eating the Macs.
      I hope your Tuesday will be marvellous, Gus

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