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Read MoreLADIES ROOM CONQUEST You are crying...I've been there and back......lean on me! It's ok...you don't have togo back out there! My name is Paula.Nice to meet you!You have a pretty smile. Yes you do!I have no reason to lie.You're shaking. Come here!I will comfort...
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Thanks. I think I need to find more meaning in my life. I post everyday and have put together 2 books that no one has read. It’s starting to seem pointless. I may take a break soon or just give up.
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Hoi hoi
Love this one.I went to a lezzie bar (one of the first in Amsterdam) with a lady friend of mine. It wasn’t really common for a guy to be there and my bum was lovingly slapped by some of the women on their way to the loo.
That’s why I know that there is always something going on in the loo.
My idea for you would be to drink a little less and love a little more. Love as in making love.
And never give up trying for happiness and very good writes….But hey, it’s only me. I read your writes no matter what.
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Keep on write and keep on tasting the cotton candy. Don’t give up.
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You are super talented. Don’t leave!
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Read MoreGrandma's Blanket It's red and beige and Grandma gaveit to me when I was seven, just beforeshe died. It's been stolen a coupletimes by family but I tracked it down. My heavy Indian blanket used to cover me completely as a...
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Read MoreJERK OFF GIRLEvery city has it's secret spots...to find some sexual relief.It moves around as wordget's around. I know.A girl HAS to make a living.Don't assume it's all aboutpoor little Paula - it's not.Been there...done only some of it.I...
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Sounds like a rough world in which to live. The writing lives on and on…
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DAMN! You’ve seen it all. Your description and detail is razor sharp. Explicit, and some readers may have a hard time with this material. But goddamn it’s to the point and marvelously executed.
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So beautiful, so dark, so you Brenda. Excellent piece my friend.
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good mornig dearest Keith I’m happy you liked it I was worried I went too far but I never worried about that before why start now right? thank you my friend ❤️
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Redemption with a hollow scream. Love it, Brenda.
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hello dearest Adagio good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you ❤️
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hello lovely one good evening thank you just a feeling that overcame me last night I wasn’t sure if I should write this I’m happy it worked for you ❤️
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As we read this we think of our darkness and how it hungers always for more. We constantly watched for the slightest weakness, even inattention is a weakness. But to have it’s icy call within our darkness and acceptance, deeelish
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hello dearest Me I think of the parst of space that are empty I find peace there it is a heavy dark… there I can be myself I go wandering…someday when I pass from this dominion I hope to explore other plains of existence thank you so much for you very apt comment ❤️
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Hoi hoi Chère C.,
Love the write.
And love the artwork too.
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hello dearest Gus good evening thank you most graciously I love the picture as well I thought it went well with the poem ❤️
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This reads more like a short story then a poem. I love it. The darkness and moodiness crawls into my skin. As I read, I love the atmosphere you created with your words and with the image. Marvelous Brenda. xo
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good morning dearest Keith I think you’re right I should have listed it as a series it well be part of a bigger story thank you gracioulsy for taking in the mood ❤️
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Father, I confess to ink the silence, haunting the moonless nights. Well done, Brenda.
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thank you graciously dearest Adagio for a very beautifully poetic comment ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cotton Candy is called Fairy Floss in Australia.
“She tastes like fairy floss”
Fact or fiction, you’re writing is always terrific and always grammatically correct.
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