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This is packed with so much emotion. It’s as if I could feel what you’re feeling.
Keep moving, keep trying, don’t let anyone tell you you’re not worth it.
Thank you for sharing this.
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That’s really nice, Fred. Love how you use rhyme and imagery.
I’m guessing you’re into ‘silence’ by virtue of your first three poems.One thing I might suggest is organizing your piece into more traditional stanzas that emphasize your rhyme scheme as opposed to presenting the poem in a classic prose format. You can even play with spacing as such.
This is a strong and thoughtful piece
Meg
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