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Read MoreI walked among the quiet stems, where sunlight touched the earth's hidden gems, and found a bloom, so still, so shy beneath the vast unchanging sky. It spoke no word's, yet told me all of how winds through branches call,...
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Thank you for the kind words and sound advice Meg.
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Nicely penned, Fred. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, greatly appreciated..
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Read MoreReal A dark ship on a dark night of soul Suddenly alight with Lights. Music starting to play Shadows beginning to sway Every soul having a Say. Vibrating into The skies. Everyone dies but But now everyone lives with daily rations of Passion. Breaking through ceilings with Thoughts & Feelings. To think to feel To be: Real ***Cipher Poems ***
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Beautifully penned, Cipher. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Morethere is a place where the sea is still where the waves never speakwhere the sky pulls the light awayand all that remains is quieta wound that refuses to heali stood there onceeyes closed against the saltwaiting for something...
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This is sad, but you write so well. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you kindly Alexandria, glad you enjoyed it..
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I agree this is sad. Pulled on the emotions well
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Thank you Fia
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Powerfully penned, Fred. A heavy write my friend. Silence contains mysteries, as well as moments of clarity. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the words Damian, I truly appreciate the time you took to read all 3 of my scribbles my friend…
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That’s sweet
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Thank you
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Beautifully penned, Kas. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreTake me as the sun risesWhen the night discards meWhen the mind is between worldsWhen the moment comes, I will feel you, it will be the endTake me at noonThe heat scorches the fleshBeads of sweat trickle down to...
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Kinda get’s the blood moving, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you. I have been busy lately and I wanted to post something soft but still Fia. lol
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Love the idea of the series. Love just the subtle romance.
Great ink.
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Thank you. I usually am blunt, but this helps to practice pulling it back once in a while.
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This vibe is so sexy and picturesque. I like the mood it invokes.
Much respect.
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Thank you, I do not have to be in your face to get my point across all the time. Lol.
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That’s really nice, Fred. Love how you use rhyme and imagery.
I’m guessing you’re into ‘silence’ by virtue of your first three poems.
One thing I might suggest is organizing your piece into more traditional stanzas that emphasize your rhyme scheme as opposed to presenting the poem in a classic prose format. You can even play with spacing as such.
This is a strong and thoughtful piece
Meg