Chère L.,
Yes yes yes, amen to that.
It confirms our attraction to each other, our love, our being human, everything and than some.
And you wrote it in the best possible way.
I love it a lot.
Kind regards, Gus

Standing up applauding this. I agree whole heartily. Bravo

Thank you 😊

Beautifully penned, Lizz. Such a passionate write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

The physical is 10%, but the real satisfaction is the 90% mental connection.

The last line lands in a way that makes you want to reread this again, and let it linger. This caught my breath.

This reads almost like an invocation, a chant of summoning. Much enjoyed this. As Brandon said, it invites rereading 🧡

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undertones my friend. I concur with Willow and Brandon. Amazing read. Appreciate you.

Damian

The goal changed and turned into something more quieter. Nice;)

I get this. Jumping alone leaves the mind just as isolated as being alone. If nobody sees, are you real? Do you matter? I so get this. That ending is softly powerful

Powerfully penned, 253. Another excellent write with many layers my friend. I can relate.. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is deep, and it quietly resonates. Great piece 253.