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Read MoreShe was sweeping the floor when I crept in. Sharleen: straggly blonde hair, round smiley face, freckly nose, dimples. Looking as sensational as ever in a cropped crimson top and tight skinny jeans slung five inches below her navel....
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Thanks very much, Fia,
Sharleen is based on a real-life God-fearing woman (brunette not blonde, though) who works in the dry cleaners at my local high street in Epping, and an encounter that really took place! She could definitely sort the World out given half the chance!
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Harriet-Jacqui xx posted in the group National Poetry Month
State of Mind:
Dear Danny,
I sit alone behind these grey concrete walls, wondering if the Police really know it all?
Craving just a little male affection when all I seem to get is your rejection?
Write me letters, pick up the phone, need your sweetness, so sick of living here on my own.
I loved you, baby, you loved me, said I loved ya, it…Read More![]()
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Read More**A Complaint to You** I complain about you— about this life we are living now, about the way we drift through days without knowing how. When you care, you must also give— for what is love if not the courage to live? I complain about you again, for giving...
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My draft I see AI couldn’t express so well my emotional thoughts.
I complain about you for the life
Which we are seeing now
When you care you also need to giveI complain about you that you are giving much fun than freaking life which you are of with
I complain now about you that your responsibility has risen with much sacrifice to give to make mom and dad to be a dad as like dad and mom care and sacrifice.
I do because you are wasting a dollar for every second and you are not saving a dollar every second.
I beg your pardon for seeing the life what we are going through I must say complaints to you about your self because we ended up with no control of mom and dad…..
Jessy Jacob ❤️
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Nice write. I like the continuation of reasons that you stacked in the stanzas. It works well. Solid writing.
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Hi, thank you for your review. Your encouraging reply is great effort in making me a better writer.
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redzone and
Harriet-Jacqui xx are now friends
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Curly Grace posted in the group National Poetry Month
Unraveling
I watched the thread,
slip from my fingers,
cold as steel.I couldn’t hold the end,
or trace the start.Like a shadow in alleys,
following the hunt,
its shadow in my chest,
too swift to name.I watched the thread
through the silence.You can only sense
when nothing stirs.I felt tremors pulse
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I was just thinking the other day of all the ways of saying and meanings for unravel. This is a potent expression of it 😊
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This is different. I like how you build this and have me waiting to find out how but I know it will never be revealed. Very nice.