• age of reason

    When human minds begin to fray And souls forget their tune  The ones who stand apart and judge Believe they're still immune. But we're all so bloody fragile, Our thoughts can lose their form; No soul beneath the turning sky Can shelter from that storm. Each person...

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    • Hi Peter

      How are you?
      You expressed so much in few lines.

      Jessy Jacob

      • I’m fine and thanks for asking.
        This poem was prompted by a newspaper article about a woman who changed completely after menopause…..we are very fragile.
        🙏

    • It’s the ones who insist they’re fine when clearly they’re not that scare me. We humas are very fragile indeed

    • Well you’re right! And sometimes we think we know them, until we realize that we don’t. The mind is each of our own little universe, it’s so vast. Some people get off track along the way.

    • Powerfully penned, Peter. Another excellent write with lots of layers my friend. No one is immune to time and the effects it has on the mind. Thanks for sharing. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Chasing Trains

    ‘We will shortly be arriving at Bath Spa. Would passengers please remember to take their belongings with them when they leave the train. This is the 14:43 Great Western service to Chippenham, Swindon, Didcot, Reading and London Paddington. Bath...

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    • I had to read this twice… the first was in the dark… then I switched on the light and read it again… wow .. you always make things difficulty amazing… your writing is just just… amazing… and you make me forget words… I only remember amazing

    • Thank you so much for your kind comment, Sam. I have released a book book (a book that lends itself to being read in the old style by the hearth of a cosy fire, flicking pages as opposed to flicking ebook screens): Hearts & Minds written from a male perspective by Daniel Furl. Unbelievably, for me, you, us writers, I’m venturing out of my shell, selling the book (others, too) at leisure centres and village craft markets! The opening part, Trains, has railway-mad Daniel, aged 10 narrating his early life, spotting trains. It leads into Chasing Trains, mysterious and dark! The perfect fit. I’ll message you about posting the cover here, I’ll donate! Harriet-Jacqui xx

  • I get so much
    Satisfaction washing
    God’s people’s feet
    Also when I teach
    The bible to God’s
    People they become
    Hungry for the bible
    It was God that wrote
    The bible
    With his holy hands
    A long time ago

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    Sitting in Tipp City

                                                                       The window fan keeps telling me Though I don’t...

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