a very heavy write no one should bear such a burden it’s too much to bear… my son drank himself to death we are left with a hole in our life knowing he chose death… hugs ❤️

I agree with crimsin this is very heavy. There sadness, grief and confusion left behind because of the suicide will never truly go away.

Excellent. truly.
The topic is always brutal in its finality. How it is written of is where we, as the living, try to reason with the utter chaos that it must be on them. I never, ever understand that quitter mentality. That sounds cruel, calling them quitters, but that is how I see it and deal with it. I have suicides in my family, and it pisses me off.
Many of us have had horrendous circumstances to deal with, but the act of surviving is what makes us supreme beings.
Hope is eternally gold. It makes us rich.
Your write is outstanding in its view, and the crafting of it. I really admire this.

Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. I like the way certain lines contradict one another. Nice touch. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Benny for the most part I cannot connect with people as they only offer the surface I hear this well written and deeply felt poem ❤️

Thanks folks

Ohh the passion in the write and the meaning touched me.

A highly entertaining, fantastic story, told in your unique style. I found myself wishing my youngest grandkids could be hearing you. Disney studios should learn about you.

hello beautiful poetess you are a sensitive soul and deserved better treatment great write ❤️

Words have that power. I hope this is not towards you.

Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian