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Read MoreThe door slammed behind me, indicating that the chief must have decided I was in the wrong and her incompetent rookie was in the right.“What the hell were you doing coming in the back way? You are no longer...
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading my story;))
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how you repeat that couplet at the end. It wraps everything up in a neat package. This is a really cool piece with sociopathic undertones which catch my attention. I love an unreliable narrator. I love an evil genius. A lot of women do… the bad boy syndrome. Boys grow up to be devils. And girls… well, sometimes we invite them in.
Nice piece!
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I really appreciate you for shining your light on this.
A man’s (in this case) internal struggle in such a situation has always intrigued me, yet is beyond alien to me at the same time.
I love exploring my uncharted territory.
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Read MoreI'm trying to find my way through this obscuring fog, a thick veil called psychosis. Navigating unmedicated is near impossible. Being off an anti-psychotic itself is insanity! I was off onto this foggy path, a path with an uncertain end. Now, medicated, that dreaded veil lifts, and everything clears, the...
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Read MoreAs my lips pressed into yours,my hand rested on your neck. As my chest pressed into yours,your heartbeat I felt was so profound. As my other hand guided yours to my neck, you felt the blood surging from my head down. As...
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Your a great storyteller Fia. Nice work!!