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Read MoreCalling all those who fish I have an idea that's delish Can you write about the catch Not the one that you threw back I have a Twist in mind Not all fish are one of a kind The catch can be by sea or...
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It’s fine. Go for it and write crimsin
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I cast desire upon the tide,
My fingers tremble for her weight
A secret urge I cannot hide,
My bait a promise, sweet as fate.She rises shimmering, bare and bold,
Her flanks and curve inflame the air
Enticing as forbidden gold,
She stirs my blood with fevered dare.She fights, resists, with sultry grace,
Her finish slick against my skin;
The pull, the yield, our swift embrace
She swallows lust, I drink her in.On shore, still dripping wet with lust,
Her form revealed, full-bodied, wild
We meet as lovers, freed and flushed
My catch, my craving, reconciled-
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Oh wow, Peter that was good
Thank you for participating
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Alexandria and
Ghosteen are now friends
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Read MoreMirror of the World (Short Story) The smell of ripe fruit was in the air, when the wandering dervish entered the small village. On that hot summer day he was looking forward to a cooling drink of water from the common...
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This is sweet and insightful. If only people could see the reflection in the mirror. Do onto others as you would like them to do onto you. (I remember some school teaching)
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Thank you very much for your kind comment dear Fía! You are rightn – living together in harmony could be so easy if we treated everyone the way we want to be treated ourselves.
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Ich liebe es, Elke! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Vielen Dank für deinen wundervollen Kommentar, Daniel. Support from a great writer like you means a lot to me!
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Beautifully penned, Elke. You’re a gifted storyteller my friend, really enjoyed this. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I bow to you with gratitude for your appreciation and encouragement dear Damian👃
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Such a sweet and uplifting tale.
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Thank you very much for reading and writing such a lovely comment, my friend!
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An excellent story, to remember.
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Thank you very much, dear Adàgio!
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I enjoy fables, folk tales, fantasy and the like, and so I enjoyed this quite a lot. I wish this dervish could visit all around the world and teach people to behave better.
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Yes you are right, Sam! The earth could be a wonderful place, if we worked together and took good care of one another and the whole planet.
Thank you very much for reading and commenting!
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Read MoreWhat I can't understand is how poetry falls into my hand like glittering stars in the sky. I picked one I can't lie. The pull it has over me to give it to all of you. You say I've given so many away I Hoping that...
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I hear you beautiful Fia people take them too seriously which hinders our creativity as it just flows I went through an anger period when I was going through a tough time and lost a lot of followers because of it peace to you lady let it come as it will 💕
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Thank you, crimsin ;))
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Its a gift to be able to express feeling with words..I’m glad you have the gift 🌼
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Thank you, Joe ;))
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Words have serious magical power….that’s why we call it SPELLING. I’m sure you’ve that one before, but it’s true. Where do thoughts and inspiration come from? Poetry is the great filter. Use responsibly.
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You are correct. Thank you Benjamin;))
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Cleverly penned, Fia. I always enjoy your musings. Phenomenal write, cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate that,cuz
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I think of my poetry as not by me. It’s by little ghost in my ear nagging me till I write their words down hehe. Wonderful ink, friend.
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Thank you, Nick😊
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I can’t even count the emotions I’ve given ink to. Without poetry…I have no voice. Without a voice…we fade. Very nice
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Thank you, Willow;))
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I think you did well writing about the siren and showing that they are not evil. I like the flow of this piece.
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this makes me think of metaphors for getting with someone romatically and going to the flea market and haggling for the write price haggling with a whore sorry Fia it’s the images your challenge brought 💕