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![Profile picture of Styxian]()
Very cool! Hey we like you via your writes! You have a lot going on in your head, so therefore you are not boring right? LOL
I like how you search for what works for you, creativity wise. It reads well as a poem, and then the boom as a song.
This is great stuff.-
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Thank you for your kind words Styxian! It means a lot to me.
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Truly enjoyed the read then when I reached the bottom and pushed play, it completely elevates your write. Honestly, I enjoy reading first and thinking about how it will sound when I push play
at the bottom. It’s like the music aspect is desert after the meal/read lol
Hope that makes sense.
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Thank you so much Adelphina! It does make sense yes! I really appreciate you 🙏🏻
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hello dearest Drieks we need hope and no one likes me don’t feel bad…it doesn’t matter what circle I’m in I don’t fit one on one I do great in groups not at all… ps I like you I just have failed to comment much of late… this write you should be proud of ❤️
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Such kind words Crimsin 🙏🏻 this means the world to me. Thank you ❤️
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“I’m the echo in a room that never speaks
Nobody likes me
Because there’s nobody like me
I’m the secret even silence couldn’t keep.”Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics per usual my friend. That chorus above, next level wordplay! Once again your arrangement highlights your words. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That means a lot coming from you Damian 🙏🏻 Thank you!
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Oh, my god this is so good! I just played this so my wife could hear you again (and me) and it is just phenomenal! And what an incredible voice! Give her some love, girl. Plus the music and arrangement, everything is top notch!
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Read MoreHIT BY A TRUCK(This is Joe's true story. 11/4/11.)He left work at rush hour. He had tocash his paycheck and get home. They needed food and diapers. Money was tight. He couldn't afford a car. He walked.Down the street...
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The world is filled with Joe’s and Joelines.
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I knew him and his wife 2 years before his accident and I just recently ran into him and we caught up. Where are the happy endings? I’m not seeing them. Everyone has a rough time, now.
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Liziantus-Marantus wrote a new post
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Read MoreSometimes I can't help but wonder.How do you immortalize love?Maybe by the memories we had together wander. Or trying harder for one another.Perhaps you need to write and sing a ballad.Perhaps a love song,one with thoughtful lyrics. And beat that's very...
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Favorite stanza,
“Instead finds new beginnings and ways.
Maybe the love we have is represented by a sun.
And a moon that looks down at it fondly”
I enjoyed this.-
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That bit was inspired by the person this poem was inspired by!
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Don’t forget the scratching of the initials upon a tree trunk!
Wonderful write with plenty of motivating lines so the reader can ponder your message.
Well done.
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Tim wrote a new post
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Read MoreIt was on a sultry Sunday.after almost45 minutesof passionate delaythe towerwhich swayed to and froby ropesfinally sat atop the church erect. You thought Imeant somethingelse didn't you?
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Great twist.
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:))))))))) Thanks.
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I thought you were standing at attention funny dearest Tim ❤️
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I’m quite capable of it. :))) Thank you crimsin.
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Cleverly penned, Tim. A very witty write my friend. Dig this. Appreciate you.
Damian
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🙂 thanks Damian.
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Well if you’re going to use the big E-word like that! We’re going to think the obvious. LOL
And then you put us on the guilt trip of sin once we realize it’s about a steeple of a church! You are sinister.-
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hahahaha, I gotcha didn’t I. lol Thanks Styx.
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Ironically, I was thinking of a write about sinners under the shadow of a (large) cross. I’m not sure about the religious aspect or not, just the idea of mankind doing what we do under that perceived shadow.
So we will see.-
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Sounds interesting. I’ll be reading it if you write it.
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Nope. That’s exactly what I thought you were talking about haha.
Great ink friend
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lol Thanks, Nick. 🙂
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Tim this was such a fantastic surprise. lol Well written indeed. And indeed it was quite a surprise.
John
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It happens sometimes, I guess. I’ve been erected, it’s nice. lol :))
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🙂 🙂
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The title alone is gonna draw reads, but it seems like a great series, good luck
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Thank you. I rarely write on this theme. But I am glad I managed to write it long time ago, for whom partner I do not remember. It must have been one of them. 🙂
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Oh my! I been think this for some time. Whoever it may have been – was lucky.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Marvelous. Nice work.
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Thank you a lot. I appreciate it.
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Thank you so much! It means the world to me. Truly. 💕