This is the best thing of yours that I ever read.
You should be congratulated.
Congratulations dear.

You are welcomed at least that much. 🙏🏼

“Jim is correct” I like the sound of that. But really, I appreciate that and the fact that you see the wonder of this poem tells me a lot about you too. 🙂 💚

😊 Thank you dear.

TY – too kind would imply harm of some kind, like killing you with it. I think you don’t mean that tho. I think you mean you like me. I like you as far as I can tell from here 😉

You mean out of my freakin’ mind hysterical or funny?

🙂
be well

The bees chasing the flowers over and over again. We are chasing something, but what is it?

Cotton Candy is called Fairy Floss in Australia.
“She tastes like fairy floss”
Fact or fiction, you’re writing is always terrific and always grammatically correct.

🌻

Thanks. I think I need to find more meaning in my life. I post everyday and have put together 2 books that no one has read. It’s starting to seem pointless. I may take a break soon or just give up.

Hoi hoi
Love this one.

I went to a lezzie bar (one of the first in Amsterdam) with a lady friend of mine. It wasn’t really common for a guy to be there and my bum was lovingly slapped by some of the women on their way to the loo.

That’s why I know that there is always something going on in the loo.

My idea for you would be to drink a little less and love a little more. Love as in making love.
And never give up trying for happiness and very good writes….

But hey, it’s only me. I read your writes no matter what.
Kind regards, Gus

Keep on write and keep on tasting the cotton candy. Don’t give up.

You are super talented. Don’t leave!

Wow! That was a very sensual reminiscence. You really brought the imagery here

Hoi hoi

Wow! If this isn’t a declaration of love, I don’t know what is.
What a beautiful write!
A great thing you posted it!

Kind regards, Gus

I enjoy writing about this type of memory. Thanks for reading! Always grateful for your visits and comments.

Loss of innocence written with impressionist imagery that captivate me as I read. Very well done indeed.

John

Exceptional ink my friend .. thank heaven for memories eh & of course for poetry .. Neville 😎👍

Sounds like a rough world in which to live. The writing lives on and on…

DAMN! You’ve seen it all. Your description and detail is razor sharp. Explicit, and some readers may have a hard time with this material. But goddamn it’s to the point and marvelously executed.