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Read MoreIn a bar's outdoor beer garden,patrons mingle, talk politics,and eat sausagewhile downing beerbeneath an old oak's shade. Among them standsa sultry young woman,accustomed to turning headswherever she goes. Beside her mother,she surveys the crowd,catching the familiar glancesof men who notice her. Then,...
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I’m glad you liked it, Fia. Thanks. 🙂
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dearest Tim I hate women like that money grubbers trading their looks for cash prostitutes great write ❤️
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Thanks very much for the comment, Crimsin.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Another excellent write that speaks some truth my friend. Some marriages are more like business arrangements these days. Cold and transactional it would seem. Just my two cents brother. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for your thoughts, Damian. Always a pleasure to see you on my page.
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Tim you paint the scene and the sultry women with masterful brush strokes of description. This took me right into the scene so that I could see everything and the storytelling here is excellent. A really great poem that puts me right there and the slice of life here is tantalizing. Our former local coroner married a young lady who had a tryst with the pool boy and the coroner left his wife. As a woman told me he should have known at his age why she married him in the first place for his money. Loved this so much.
John
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Go your own way Fia
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Thank you, Peter;))
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This portrays power and the ability to choose on her own terms. A devilish poem, Fia, 🙂
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Thank you, Tim;))
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Passionately penned, Fia. Another excellent write as always my friend. Amazing read. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;)
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Read MoreI wait and allow you to unfold Everything is rushed Nothing is savored Wait until the moment The exact moment When a tremor Signals It is time Time to allow you To unfurl like A deadly flower You tempt me To lean over Convince me that You are ready Still… Something… Is held back I’ll wait
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hello beautiful Fia this is very passionately seductive ❤️
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Hi Crimsin. thank you :))
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Passionately penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian😁
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Anticipation causes as many heart attacks as does the activity! The pressure verses the release can be extremely volatile!
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It can cause a heart attack, lol Thank you Styxian😊
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A calm and mysterious journey.
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Yes it is. thank you Knight😊
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Read MoreI try my best to be the nice guy but all this small talk leaves a bitter taste in my mouth like my mind disconnects from my brain what to do what to say like walking on a tight rope or playing some rigged game where only...
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Raw with exasperation and the demand of desire
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Haha this is a good one and I like how you end it with the old saying.