Love this story poem. It’s a mental transportation to another place.

Powerfully penned, SW. You are speaking truth my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

It seems to me that much evil hides within the hairs of wool. Explains why it is so itchy! Succinct and powerful write.

Well, that was an event, and I think you still did not pass that bulb since you still light up my friend. Enjoyed this piece. Oh, I do not like tomatoed based baked beans either. lol

I enjoyed this from beginning to end. I’d say your grandmother is still keeping an eye on you, my friend. She must know something…

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It hit me that way, while I was writing it. It was a very authentic moment. Appreciate you.

Damian

Some of the best writing you have ever shared with us. Sensational and held my interest. Nice work Damian.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story, Damian. I love the simplistic history that makes us all humans deep down, no matter if we try to hide it.
I have very vivid memories of one of my grannies. She was a tiny firecracker. Snap a chicken’s neck and yet tend to our little boo-boos with TLC with the same hand.
Burger Chef rocked!
Wonderfully vivid write, it kept me enthralled.

Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Amazing dark write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

The light only blinds and befuddles us, while darkness softly and thoroughly embraces our truth, regardless. There is indeed something special about nothingness -the void- where everything and nothing is possible.

Superb write, my friend!

hello Mary thank you graciously lovely one 💕

Exquisite story and writer you are! Enjoyed this…

Brilliant and highly erotic.

Love Bradley….. lol

What a kickass poem. Nice work Paula!

I have no clue. His last name was Jones. Lol. Millions of them out there. Don’t know if I ever knew his birthday or exact age. Very short friendship. I hadn’t thought about him in years.