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Read MoreJust speak to meand you’ll gaze into thewilderness behind my eyes.This wilderness,lush in dreams,barren realities!As I open the gate for you,I sit and listen white-knuckledto the voices within my mind.The further you trek in my mind,the closer to summery...
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Nice slide rhyme and repetition…
Solid imagery in [pioneer’s compass]…
I had a new idea for implementation
of imagery…Do something like a Carlos Williams
Red Barrel…Like just insert in…
In a unique and strange way…
Or do such a thing at multiple
sites in the poem…Perhaps with multiple separate
images…
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Read MoreHeaven can wait…Death a distant thunderstormwith lightning strikes far offannouncing its distant presence.Suicide is not the answer.I do not want to hurtthose that show compassion.So, I’ve decided Heaven can wait.
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This is awesome Daniel…
Such creative format…
Clever use of ellipsis
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Will do! Haha
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Read MoreThere is a soothing storm within. Gently, thunder booms from my heart.Gentle heartbeats make emotional wavesand I cannot stop my feelings for her.There is a teary deluge within.My tears, the wine of my loneliness,which intoxicates me until I’m love-struckand...
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Read MoreOdeto the inky,midnight Raven,harbinger of ill-omen.Lightlessness in her eyes,heralding one’s demise.Wolfish, you are!Voraciously within those eyes lies hunger.Darkly clad, your soul will nigrify.
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Read MorePsychosis carried in the gales,for I am surely windblown,windward from my own psyche,where boundaries of reality have eroded.With concealed hands,a nonvisual hallucination caressesthe encasement of my soul,provoking verbal responses.Nothingness which wreathes around me,a curve in a state of nonexistencemeandering...
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This piece turns so well…
Word selection totally opens
up the experience…Righteous darkness…
Inspiring to me…
I am writing a story
about a group of poets
who commit group
suicide…Was gonna be three
ladies, who learn
one of them dying…Inspired by Eerie…
But then I decided
I would need more
bodies to qualify
for:Group suicide.
Hahaha.
I started the
story in first
person narrative
but I am thinking
of pulling out
of that and going
into omniscient,
if that’s even possible…🙂
Nicely done Daniel…
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Great detail. The suspense and direction this poem goes is alluring. Nice work!