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Tim
9 months, 2 weeks ago

Nice one, Damian. A beautiful women can put a man under a spell that makes him forget any pain.
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Very true, totally agree. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Fia Naturie
9 months, 2 weeks ago

Those are amazing lyrics. Love it;))
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Still working on the music, especially the vocals. Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
Crimsin
9 months, 2 weeks ago

hello dearest Damian this is a very great song I can feel your pain❤
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Jacob erin-cilberto
9 months, 2 weeks ago

Second stanza, first line, did you mean “you’re”?

The repetition really works. And the shield me stanza is so clever and just rolls off the tongue.
Good, good piece of writing.
j.
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jacob. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Yes, I did mean “you’re” nice catch. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Visions_of_Insanity
9 months, 2 weeks ago

Awesome! The rhymes and lyrics are infectious. Like an abscess in a tooth! Nice work dude!
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. It’s got music as well, though I’m still working on the music. I’ll let you check it out when it’s completed, nice to see you my brother. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Willow
9 months, 2 weeks ago

The interesting thing about this one is that, depending on how it’s read, it could be a woman or an addiction. Very clever use of words here, my friend!
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Nice catch, you’re on the right path. It has a lot of meanings to me as well. This is the song I’m currently putting music to. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Nick DC
9 months, 2 weeks ago

Can heat it already. Great work. Good luck on the solo album.
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thank you, I need all the luck I can get. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Kelly Scheppers
9 months, 1 week ago

Some people shy away from a poem that’s composed of rhyme. I’ve always felt that there’s a finesse to it that has to be refined like a piece of art. You have that quality. It speaks volumes, Damian!
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kelly. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. What a lovely comment, so kind of you. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
RomaJ
9 months, 1 week ago

The lyrics are so lovely, I feel the intensity of the emotions…the push and pull, the thrill and the ache. and the repeated chorus of “sweet novocain” lingers like a haunting, addictive melody. I’d love to hear you sing this. It’s beautiful
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well vocally I’m doing my best, I’m not the greatest singer. lol. I’ll share the song when it’s complete. Thanks so much for your support. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Damian DeadLove
8 months, 2 weeks ago

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like that it has multiple meanings, I always dig those kind of writes. Bon Jovi style, that’s a unique way of putting it, but
I like it. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.

Damian
Neville
8 months ago

I sense there is more to this than presently meets the eye .. Good luck with production .. I suspect it will do well ..
Neville 😎👍
- Damian DeadLove
  8 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I will admit there are multiple meanings to this one. That’s the beauty of words, In my opinion. I need all the luck I can find, thanks for offering some. lol. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Neville
8 months ago

My absolute pleasure ..

Jacob erin-cilberto
9 months, 2 weeks ago

I once experienced this with the mate of a friend of mine. I had to love her from a distance…She wanted to return the feelings, and shared that she did but couldn’t.
It was a tough place to be. The contradictions that love can present are so-well advanced in this poem.
A really good read.
j.

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