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Read MoreThe voices of silence - exclamatory silence! They vent what is suppressed, articulating what is disconnected. For answer, my tongue dances to the rhythm of my whisperer, vocalizing concealed thoughts. So, this Delilah of my mind tingles my consciousness with her voice. This luring temptress that is psychosis...
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Read MorePsychosis carried in the gales, for I am surely windblown, windward from my own psyche, where boundaries of reality have eroded. With concealed hands, a nonvisual hallucination caresses the encasement of my soul, provoking verbal responses. Nothingness which wreathes around me, a curve in a state of non-existence meandering...
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Fia Naturie posted in the group News and Suggestions
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I hadn’t anticipated needing to return so soon to address this, but it’s necessary to clarify—once again—what this platform will and will not tolerate. To ensure we are all on the same page, please read the following carefully.
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Read MoreThe night was a quiet,vast, velvet canvas.I stood beneath it,and saw a shooting star -an angel of unwavering hopeblazing across the darklike a skipping stoneon the surface of a pond,as divine grace danced upon it.Suddenly, all the stars came...
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Beautiful.
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Beauty recognized is beauty shared. Thanks for seeing it!
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What an awesome sight to witness. I would love to have seen this myself. The night sky is a source of fascination for me. Celestial fireworks indeed. Spectacular imagery. Enjoyed very much Romaj.
Chris
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Thanks so much, Chris! I’m glad you enjoyed the imagery. The poem was my attempt to capture that exact mix of awe and wonder the night sky inspires. It was actually based on a recurring dream I have. I appreciate you taking the time to read it.
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Everyone should witness a shooting star in their lifetime. As the Northern Lights, it makes human kind feel so small, but within the heart, an explosion.
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Thank you for this beautiful observation. You’ve captured the exact feeling I was trying to express. That sense of feeling so small in the face of the universe, but at the same time, experiencing a powerful explosion within the heart. I love your comparison to the Northern Lights. I’m glad the poem resonated with you.
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Viewing the Northern Lights are akin to sitting in the electric chair and feeling your ancestors tuning into the most extraordinary orchestra. Other worldly.
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Wow, what an incredible description – “ancestors tuning into the most extraordinary orchestra” gave me chills.
I’ve never seen the Northern Lights myself, but it’s a dream of mine. Your words make me want to see them even more! Thank you
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An electric green meteor coming your way.
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Haha, I’ll keep my eyes open! That would make quite the sequel to this poem. Thank you
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Beautifully penned, Roma. Breathtaking imagery and amazing wordplay my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, Thank you for the warm welcome. I appreciate you too, my friend.
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Read MoreThe Three C’s of StarsRiteCommunity, Comradery, and CommentsWriting, putting the work in & finally posting so others can read it can be a bit unnerving. One of the goals of StarsRite is to become a community that communicates!Poetry is...
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Fia,
Hmmm. Just curious, Fia, are you an administrator here in Stars?
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Yes, I have partnered up with Stars Rite.
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I’m sure this resonates with many Daniel. Kudos for posting this