Sexy and funny….well done🙏

Glad you’re back and posting erotica.
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This was quite creative. How he… the conceited king shriveled and you arose to be queen and well replenished off him, haha. Love it!

Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist

I can see your disappointed with men from this and your previous poems. Scars can go pretty deep and disappointment can be frustrating. But your expression is always deep in itself. That’s what writing is for.

Excellent!

No one had the tonsils that Janis had. Love it.

Girl beautifully written, I could picture it.

Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well?

I’ve been reading your writes with very much pleasure.
Even our musical tastes seem to have parallels.
The first Verve and Capitol LP’s by Janis Ian are still proudly in my cupboard and on my record player.
If you want to have the Janis Joplin recordings in Het Concertgebouw in Amsterdam, please let me know.

I’ll PM you for the rest.

Please keep those writes of yours coming.

Kind regards, Gus

This is amazing. Love the lyrical poetry and the meaning behind it.

Lots of truth to this, but not all. I know the trophy wives. I had crushes on them in High school. Now their married to powerful men. Life is an odd thing sometimes.

My last comment for you. You’re very talented, good luck with your writing. 🙂