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Read MoreIf I had a brain I'd be dangerous for sureJump in my hot rod I'll take you on a tourWhips & Leather always drives me insaneNext time we fuck let's add in some painNever ask, just jump on my...
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Appreciate the comments Damian. Thanks.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. What Mary said, sometimes making things right is comforting. Especially on a deathbed. For some reason when I read this I could hear, Robert Stack, narrating it. Like an Unsolved Mysteries episode. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Robert Stack & Unsolved Mysteries is one of my all time favorite shows. I have a DVD box set of U.M. Thanks Damian for the read & comments.
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I have Robert Stack on my GPS giving me directions. It reminds me of “Airplane”. I’m kidding.
You have just blown my mind with this piece, and there’s nothing insane about it. For once, it’s a vision of sanity, and I think everyone is on board with the beauty of forgiveness. It’s odd how death and finality have a way of changing our perspectives so abruptly. Setting things right can be so important. How fortunate were these two for having a middleman that kept them in touch.
Keith is it? I’m Meg. Thanks for that story!
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Airplane rules!! Every now & then I’ll write something tender. I don’t want all of you to think i’m some raging lunatic. I just write whatever comes to mind.
Absolutely right. Let’s not wait until someone is dying to make amends. Be kind and humble to one another.
Thanks Meg.xo
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Hello Adira. Glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for the gracious comments.
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This was touching. Made me think of my last visit to my mother who was on hospice with breast cancer. She was barely able to open her eyes to see me, then she was able to make a smile, the last smile I ever saw from her. Cancer took her but couldn’t kill her sweet soul. Bravo 👏
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Hi Daniel. Thanks for sharing your story. Sorry to hear about your mom. Life is fragile. Make the best with your loved ones before we all depart. Thanks for the comments.
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Powerful and poignant.
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Thank you my friend.
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Death brings either the sweetest or the meanest in human beings. In this case, it was love. A heartbreaking and heartwarming write. Both at the same time. Well done, buddy!
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Thank you for the kind words M.E. Glad you enjoyed this piece.
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Read MoreHe goes to the same job everyday.He comes home to his wife every night.They rarely touch each other.Only on special occasions, like birthday's and July 4th.There not attracted to each other anymore.They don't make a fuss about it.A few...
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Happens more than most would think. Powerfully penned, Keith. Great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian.
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Thank you Adira. Reality is painful for most. Appreciate the feedback!
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Can actually relate to this. Sadly. I feel my fiance and I no longer really love each other, not even any attraction exists. While I was reading your piece here, I felt my creative, poetic juices flowing and if I dont have any more purpose with her, then poetry and story writing will become my purpose in life. You write a simple piece, yet totally thought provoking. Bravo!
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Thanks man. I keep my writing simple, always. Many relationships go sour. It’s a very difficult thing to stay loyal and happy with that one person for the rest of your life. Stay creative Daniel. Wish you the best with your relationship.
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Read MoreAbout 15 years ago I was watching the local news. One of the main stories was of a young man aged 20 being murdered. Not by a criminal, or his friends, but by the police.The boy who had mental...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This is a sad one my friend. Pulls at these old heartstrings. Unfortunately, you’re completely right this happens far too often. 9 shots 5 cops. Somebody shot more than once. Powerful message brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It does. Many thanks for being the brave soul to read and comment.
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Read MoreA man just recently had his license reinstated. He failed to pay child support for his 7 year old kid. He needed to go to the DMV and get everything back on track. The man was approached by a...
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I read your short stories like a quick fix for some watching a disturbing movie or reading a depressing novel. Am I alright?
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Questions that need answers because same here lol
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Yes. Like What are you doing here? Let me question my sanity alone. Lol
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I have more fucked up stuff on the burner. Be ready.
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Wow, I need a Valium. That was hugely disturbing.
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Appreciate it.
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Vision, I can always look forward to you doing my head in. xx
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Thanks P.G! Love the comments.
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Disturbingly penned, Keith. This was quite dark my friend, but you always deliver a great read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate it Damian.
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Cleverly penned, Keith. You went there again my friend. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian