Interesting thought. you mean he/she will fade into obscurity if you do not think of it.

Powerfully penned, Keith. A write with lots of layers, you’re Captain Hook my friend. I mean that in a good way. Appreciate you.

Damian

Appreciate the feedback. Thanks Mary.

Once again, a great and thought provoking writing, my friend! I agree absolutely that it is a waste of time to worship revengeful and judgmental God. It only supports the authorities in power who benefit from the fear and insecurity of the masses.
Personally, I believe that there is an immeasurable and intelligent energy behind of all of creation which doesn’t care about so called sins or acts of veneration. As we are born with a thinking mind, we are challenged to decide whether to create or to destroy.
A powerful piece,hats off!

hello dearest Keith I’ve missed you so hot 💕

Passionately penned, Keith. Damn, I missed you. This has your DNA all over it, well not literally. lol. It sounds like a twisted infomercial my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

I have been in many a room with the odor of orgasm. Imagine a day, a month or longer where the entire world was driven into a sexual frenzy!
Where you have to mow the lawn around Grandmas getting it hard! Pleasant Valley Sunday…oh my! World leaders whacking each other off instead of ordering bomb drops! United Airlines, hee hee – a “hole” new meaning! It could be one orgy of a book as you took the concept from high society to ghetto and even the space station.

Appreciate the comments HJ

Phenomenal write, Detritus. Amazing work my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

very beautifully crafted 💕

Gratitude sounds in the words of eyes that see liminally on the day of the first harvest festival on the wheel of the year.

Sounds like you’re out at a lake at night. Nice

Thank you all for your kind words and support! I feel blessed to be part of this site.

Clay

Thank you both for reading and your comments! That morning truly was inspiring.

The atmosphere of this awesome poem is magical! Are you from Ireland, Detritus?

Thank you for the read and the comment, Sappho! I am from east coast usa, though, I do have some irish ancestry along with welsh and Italian.

There appears to be magic between each of your words: highlighting gently, holding safely, yet – finishing with a subtle flourish. Perhaps your ancestry dictates your broad imagination, sir.

People seem to think of ancestry as being branded on mind and spirit. But we are all individuals touched by where we go, who we meet, how life loves or brands us. Don’t we use what is at the core and then instinctively react?
Perhaps one has to slip into the distant future to find out?!

Hey, you’re back. This reminds me of Dumplings on Netflix. A 2005 horror movie that I watched in the daytime. lol ( I am a scaredy cat. You know that.)
Good flow

Bringing the thunder, Keith. Cannibal Corpse.. I know some Death Metal. lol. This write knows how to make an entrance my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

An ‘Ouvre-Moi Ta Porte..Que Je T’Ouvre Le Ventre’ slightly like poem. It left my stomach churning.

Well done! And welcome back! “)

Sort of back. More of a cameo appearance. Your a great person and a favorite poet of mine. Thank you for the feedback Adira. xo