Outstanding! One of the best poems I’ve read all n starsrite… and I mean that. Into the list it goes! Will be checking out your other work.

Daniel

Echo the others
This is how erotica is written

Bravo !

I steer clear of porn for the most part. But this is not that. It has taste and intrigue. It’s a thoroughly enthralling read. Well done.

Passionately penned, RPM. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This was a moment in time, very precious, captured beautifully

Thank you so much. I am very grateful for the comment!

” The years had left some tangled vines—
But still, tonight, they chose to choose.”

Mic drop.

Much respect

Naaj

We have no choice but to be here ..

Poets write sometimes in order to avoid Last Rites

BIG
LIKE

Read twice
Hit me different second time around as the bartender was calling for last round ..

Like PoetSpeak, I read this one twice. It has the feeling of a bell rolling in the mist. That question at the end…if you get an answer, I would like in on the knowledge

Powerfully penned, Cipher. This is a deep write my friend, lots of layers. Appreciate you.

Damian

‘Light lies
in
bright
eyes. Captured in forward and backward enrapture. The light
of
life. The seeming meaning
in the
dreaming. ‘
A core of words needing a home, thoughts laid, meanings personal yet to share. Takes hold on the second read.