Fred – Stars Rite

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Crimsin
10 months, 1 week ago

hello Fred I love your reverence for her great write 💕
- Fred
  10 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thank you Crimsin, appreciate you…
Damian DeadLove
10 months, 1 week ago

Amazing write, Fred. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Fred
  10 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thank you Damian….

Alexandria
10 months, 1 week ago

This is a tender write. You’re not talking about a garden at all. It’s your love for a relationship lost. It’s beautiful.
- Fred
  10 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thank you Alexandria..
Fred
10 months, 1 week ago

Thank you Adira, hope you have a wonderful day as well…
Damian DeadLove
10 months, 1 week ago

Beautifully penned, Fred. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Fred
  10 months, 1 week ago
  
  thank you Damian..

DampKitten
10 months, 1 week ago

That’s really nice, Fred. Love how you use rhyme and imagery.
I’m guessing you’re into ‘silence’ by virtue of your first three poems.

One thing I might suggest is organizing your piece into more traditional stanzas that emphasize your rhyme scheme as opposed to presenting the poem in a classic prose format. You can even play with spacing as such.

This is a strong and thoughtful piece

Meg
Fred
10 months, 1 week ago

Thank you for the kind words and sound advice Meg.
Damian DeadLove
10 months, 1 week ago

Nicely penned, Fred. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Fred
  10 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thank you Damian, greatly appreciated..

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