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Read MoreJust speak to meand you’ll gaze into thewilderness behind my eyes.This wilderness,lush in dreams,barren realities!As I open the gate for you,I sit and listen white-knuckledto the voices within my mind.The further you trek in my mind,the closer to summery...
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Nice slide rhyme and repetition…
Solid imagery in [pioneer’s compass]…
I had a new idea for implementation
of imagery…Do something like a Carlos Williams
Red Barrel…Like just insert in…
In a unique and strange way…
Or do such a thing at multiple
sites in the poem…Perhaps with multiple separate
images…
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Read MoreHeaven can wait…Death a distant thunderstormwith lightning strikes far offannouncing its distant presence.Suicide is not the answer.I do not want to hurtthose that show compassion.So, I’ve decided Heaven can wait.
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This is awesome Daniel…
Such creative format…
Clever use of ellipsis
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Will do! Haha
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Damian DeadLove and
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Read MoreIt is I, once again. Who want’s a story? If you wanna hear one, I have a funny one. To me it’s funny, anyways. You all might be reading this and shaking your heads. Thinking to...
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story, my friend. Much obliged, for your compliment. I just never considered myself funny, all though maybe I’m funnier when I write, it would explain why some jokes bomb when I’m talking. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love this! You write like a modern day Kerouac who has been in his scene and can put it down in colorful and engaging words. Truly loved reading this. It gave me a smile and painted my evening with a scene I loved seeing through your words.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for the compliment, Kerouac, that’s pretty good company. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreCommunity- Comradery - CommentsWriting, putting the work in & finally posting so others can read it, can be a bit unnerving. One of the goals of StarsRite is to become a community that communicates!Poetry is subjective to the interpretation...
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Great detail. The suspense and direction this poem goes is alluring. Nice work!