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      Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

      Solace In Chicago

      I got lost in the depths of Chicago tonightSwaying to the horn sections sonic assault Catching the beat with a melody so bright  Hearing this rhythm burning hot as asphalt Smooth transition into another catchy hookA walking bass line marches with the...

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      • I grew up listening to them. They bring back many high school memories. Nice one, Damian.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Love the classic stuff myself. After Kath passed away, Cetera took control. His vision was more pop, and less horns. Like I said the band lost it’s soul without, Terry. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • A beautiful tribute to Chicago and Terry Kath. I love how the poem captures the energy of their horns, bass, piano, and guitar. It perfectly conveys how their classic sound can bring both excitement and solace.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Terry Kath, was the heart of the band for sure. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • To find solace in the music. It is a comfort that I need. Nice writing cuz

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s something we all need in my opinion. Appreciate you, cuz.

          Damian

      • There is something about classic rock that is so authentic.
        The way it sounds and the tempo. Love the stuff!
        Wonderful tribute write Damien.
        I especially loved the piano is simmering line!

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love that line as well, gotta love the classics. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • A fine and much deserved tribute to one helluva guy .. Write and rock on my fine literary friend .. Neville 😎👍

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. He was one of a kind for sure. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • There really wants another sound like theirs, was there? I’m permanently haunted by the music of the 80s and theirs always lands on my mental and emotional playlists. This is a beautiful tribute, my friend

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. They had some decent songs in the 80’s. But Peter Cetera took control of the group once Terry died. He envisioned a more poppy sound with less horns. It just never had the soul of the classic 70’s sound. Terry Kath was their heart, and they were never the same without him. Just my opinion. Appreciate you.

          Damian

          • See, I always learn something from you in these. I wasn’t allowed to listen to the radio until the 80s so I missed most of the ‘before’ era. I’ll have to go hunting…

      • Chicago is absolute badass. I never liked the pop-driven 80’s stuff, and I believe it skews the perception of this band for many. Live performances as powerful as any metal band. Solid tribute.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Benjamin. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree. Cetera’s vision of the band was a huge departure from Kath’s. The 70’s stuff had balls, it had heart and soul. Killer live band, Kath’s blazing solo on 25 or 6 to 4 comes to mind. You know your music. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • I like it when you put us nearer an artist, or group, and we can perhaps learn a bit or just revel in the story too.
        You’re an interesting man, Mr Damian. Thank you for sharing some of your talent and history with us! I enjoy it all.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well thank you, that means a lot to me my friend. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Having older sisters gave me access to all types of music from an early age. Can still recall hearing ‘If You Leave Me Now’ for first time. Your words are a poignant tribute.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ghosteen. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love all kinds of music. I started out a metal head, but I’ve evolved over time. lol. Good song. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Hello Damian. Excellent write as usual. Never was a fan of Chicago. My parents were huge into them during the 70’s. The one album I do appreciate and own is their debut from 69. Terry Kath destroys it on that release. His playing is right up there with Hendrix.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. The first album was killer, Kath, was an amazing guitarist. Hendrix himself, told one of the horn players in the band, that Kath was better than him. According to legend that is. lol. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Band like Chicago were so good and creative. We don’t get bands like that anymore. Great ink friend.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. No we don’t it’s a shame. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • I absolutely love the music of Chicago. They rock my world. And your poem is true to the city and the band. I felt the urban pulse of he music an city that was vibrant and totally had me in the world of that band and the city. As rhythmic as a song and colorful as the greatest jazz poems. Enjoyed this immensely.

        John

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Love them too, Terry Kath, was their heart and soul. Chicago after his death was a more pop/rock. Thank you for the excellent commentary. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Wasn’t it Jimi Hendrix who said Terry Kath was THE best guitar player – EVER? Wow, what a sound this group had…what talent. I caught them in concert in my high school years, and was blown away by the “horn sections sonic assault”. I had a crush on James Pankow, but Terry was truly the heart and soul of this group. What an awesome tribute to one of music’s elite bands. Thank you for your inspiration, Damian!

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kelly. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve heard that Hendrix said that as well. So cool you got to see them live, that had to be an amazing show. Elite musicianship throughout that group. The man on the sly trombone, Mr. Pankow. Danny Seraphine was a beast on the drums. But, Terry was the man. He made the guitar talk and sing. He had a hell of a voice himself, very soulful. Thank you for the lovely commentary. Appreciate you.

          Damian

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      Paula Jobi wrote a new post

      My second book...

      Probably be off for a day or so. Comment on my second book's cover or review previous pieces. Thanks!

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      • I’ll definitely check it out when it’s available.
        🙏

      • Just Kindle like the first book.

      • I am so happy for you<3

      • UPDATE: I began two hours ago and since I complied the first book weeks ago – I had trouble remembering how I did everything. First issue was getting my cover photo inside the book. Finally did that, only to discover an extra blank page I couldn’t figure how to remove! Finally cut and pasted everything a page back and began again. Line format was messed up. Reading 1.0 but looking more like 3. Nearly screamed! Finally got 2 poems of 60 inserted. I am taking a break before adding the rest. I’ll update here. I am doing this with a .docx program on my phone. Off to potty (hee hee) and eat a can of stew. Last boyfriend (from last summer) works at a food pantry (I did also for 3 weeks). Apparently he left a box of food outside my door Thursday afternoon.

      • Love that cover Lady

      • Not sure what I’ll decide for cover 3 next time.

      • Book two…SECRET PIECES IS ONLINE! It took a bit of time to throw it together and then edit it. PLUS, I accidentally uploaded the wrong cover and fixing it took another day!

      • Book three will be LOST PIECES and I have a cover I’m tinkering with.

    • In That Moment (Sonnet)

      I n   t h a t   M o m e n t~-———————-~**~-———————-~The last thing on my lips ~ a prayer for Thee,sent just before my eyes close for the night,that every sweet wish in your dreams soar free,caressing deep...

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      • I find it challenging to write sonnets. This is beautiful

        • Good morning, Dear Fia 🌼

          It’s so wonderful to receive the joy of your words on this rather warming little homage to sweet romance.
          Yes, the Sonnet can be a challenge, but soon enough I’ll show you how easy it is create your own.

          I’m so happy you think mine is “beautiful”.
          Thank you ever-so warmly! ⁓ Rascal🖌

      • So timeless… great flow… steeped in imagery…

        • Ah, our beautiful Lady Dragonfly 🎶

          How charmingly gracious of you to select one of my warmly sensual verses to enjoy ‘n leave such a gratifyingly inspiring gift of favor to a humble bard’s earnest efforts to write for and please – at least, one warmhearted poetess.💛

          Thank you ever-so gratefully, Dear Libellule, for your sweet words of praise and appreciation!
          Please, come again, anytime … yours truly! ⁓ Rascal🖌

      • A sunny Monday morning to thee, Dear Poetess🌤

        Thank you for sharing such lovely, heartwarming sentiments … I’m so very happy you selected one of my romantic pieces to read and comment on so sweetly.

        I think you’re quite delightfully perfect, yourself! ⁓ Rascal🖌

      • A fine Monday morning to thee, Ma’am 🌺

        How delighted I am you chose one of my humble poems to read
        and leave such a pleasurable sentiment.

        Thank you, Harriet … you’re rather lovely, Yourself! ⁓ Rascal🖌

      • Beautifully penned, Rascal. Excellent write with crisp imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

        • Thank you, Dear Damian 🤜💥🤛

          For reading and your generously gracious, appreciated comments, and inspiring accolades.

          It’s a distinct pleasure to write for you, Syr.
          Happy Autumn! ⁓ Richard 🍂

      • Ah, SeaCat,

        What a wonderfully gratifying review you’ve gifted this romantically soothing little Sonnet.
        Good eye, too! At your gentle nudge, the ‘twas spake” has been replaced with “that spoke” – it’s the Bard in me … LOL!

        I, too, look forward to sharing part of Wednesday with you! ⁓ Richard🖌

      • I’ve never written a sonnet, but they certainly are your forte, and I wanted to congratulate you on winning the gold. I was thrilled to get the bronze, after Fia informed me that I had won a badge. So thrilled to be in good company, my friend!

        Kelly x

        • ✨Thank you, Dear Kelly, ever-so warmly!✨

          Ah, M’Lovely Poetess … from the moment you and I first met (so many wonder-filled years ago), don’t you know we’ve ever since been in the very best of company?
          And now, in this magically coincidental moment, we’ve been recognized together on the same (yet different) site sharing this beautiful milestone event … wedding our unbroken bond even stronger ⁓ 🥂CONGRATULATIONS, US!🥂

          Isn’t life and poetry such a miraculously wondrous bloom?
          With happiest hugs, Kelly ⁓ Richard🖌

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