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      "Even breathing carries a price..."

      We understand pausing to catch our breath...its never easy..."Even breathing carries a price..."Sunrise, sunsetshared and alone -I speak of coffeeand mistsshadows and the windstrees, birds, passing cars...I wonder of friends,life, memories -new and old...I hurt sometimes -real and hard;...

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      • Hi Chris, such an honest write. Mornings can be and are the often the most difficult part of the day for some. I hear you. Moved by your words and the struggle I felt contained within. The title says it all.

        The other Chris

      • This is quite a good poem. It’s thought inducing, but not overly manic like some. I really like it.
        Well done.

      • This is really good, felt a little sad reading it but that shows it’s good.

      • Mornings are hardest, I think. Just placing both feet on the floor is a victory. That first cup of coffee does more for me than I can say. We’re all in this thing called life, together. Thankfully, this venue offers us a human connection. Hang in there, Chris!

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      Dead Muse

      Dead MuseBy FlatDaddyMy baby's all black and blue and broken,  lying on the bed beneath me  inside me,Done in by ice  and eight years of morphine  that never ends the pain --  but dulls the mind  slays the will ...

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      • I feel the muse here is the dead one for eight years now.
        Painful loss…she is no longer inside him. Either she forced him into the drugs or he forced her out because of them.
        I think your poetry screams about the underside of life…the side many may not want to see because it mirrors them.
        The unwanted sides.
        This is really good, FD.
        j.

        • Thank you so much, J. All true, of course; however, in poetry, all readers can see only what they can interpret from their particular viewpoints, their own life experiences, and thus, their “interpretation” is valid only as possible truth, their truth — but actual truth can be diametrically opposite: The muse is the hero: eight years gone, killed by pain, and now, with the HELP of the morphine, is finally the resurrector. Then, of course, the morphine itself must be, and was, vanquished, and the man is back. For now, at least. In a situation like this, nothing is permanent. Try it from that viewpoint.

        • I already replied, but I keep getting a notification that takes me back to here. So I don’t know if you got what I replied last night, above this.

          • I sure did get it….the poem is universal when readers might get something different from the poem than what exactly inspired it.
            j.

            • I figured the notification number would change once the reply had been read and answered. Guess not. That’s confusing.

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      Rat Revelation

            There it was!There it was, right there in theAustin American Statesman,page E11, Sunday, April 9th, 1989:incontrovertible scientific proof!At first I thought it wasn't important,just another filler,relegated to deep burial on page E11 --and then the revelation swept...

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      • Now that is interesting. That tiny brain was in control all that time. So we have the same tiny brain and respond just the same way as a man would. Was that article in the Times? Nice read

        • See the 1st verse: Austin-American Statesman, April 9th, 1989. A real study. And boy, did I get a lot of flack from the “gentle sex.” Just reporting what I read — in my own words, of course. Isn’t that what good reporters do?

      • I was intrigued the whole time reading this.
        Informative and entertaining!
        With a side of “it wasn’t my fault”. Hahaha
        Enjoyed the read.

      • I’m glad you enjoyed it. It is a fun one to perform, though it’s been a good while since I have done that.

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