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      the corkscrew

      In the cellar,green‑glass vessels lean            one against another,   their shoulders dust‑padded,        throats sealed tight.   Some wait decades,stoppered against the tremor of handsthat might one day twist them open. Others burst early,foam rushing into the...

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      I’ve spent the vast majority of my life as an entertainer; even during my four years in the US Air Force, I did a short tour of European air bases as part of a “Tops in Blue” show featuring talent chosen from competitions at air bases throughout Europe. It lasted just a few weeks, but I was also active in the base theater group and acted in…Read More

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      • It looks like I was successful — to a degree. Fia granted me a Spoken Word group to run. Now I have to figure out how to do it. I need other people who want to be active in Spoken Word to join to post their work there, discuss their work and that of others and do anything they can to promote our work.

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    • GOODNESS, TFT!
      Now, THAT is a proper Sonnet … it’s obvious you’ve done your homework.
      Your creativity sparks, emotion sings, and diction dances. And, I like your use of elision. Could use a bit’a punctuation.
      See critique and edits below:

      I said I don’t do THIS. POems that behave (STRESS-STRESS / a count long)
      that count their beats and…Read More

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      LADIES ROOM CONQUEST

      LADIES ROOM CONQUEST You are crying...I've been there and back......lean on me! It's ok...you don't have togo back out there! My name is Paula.Nice to meet you!You have a pretty smile. Yes you do!I have no reason to lie.You're shaking. Come here!I will comfort...

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      • Cotton Candy is called Fairy Floss in Australia.
        “She tastes like fairy floss”
        Fact or fiction, you’re writing is always terrific and always grammatically correct.

        🌻

      • Thanks. I think I need to find more meaning in my life. I post everyday and have put together 2 books that no one has read. It’s starting to seem pointless. I may take a break soon or just give up.

      • Hoi hoi
        Love this one.

        I went to a lezzie bar (one of the first in Amsterdam) with a lady friend of mine. It wasn’t really common for a guy to be there and my bum was lovingly slapped by some of the women on their way to the loo.

        That’s why I know that there is always something going on in the loo.

        My idea for you would be to drink a little less and love a little more. Love as in making love.
        And never give up trying for happiness and very good writes….

        But hey, it’s only me. I read your writes no matter what.
        Kind regards, Gus

      • Keep on write and keep on tasting the cotton candy. Don’t give up.

      • You are super talented. Don’t leave!

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