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Read MoreAnna stretched under the blanket and opened her eyes. She was still in her room, the sun was still shining outside the curtains, and she had overslept as usual. The girl got out of bed, went to the window,...
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Read MoreThe rain had stopped. The only reminders of it now were small puddles on the still-wet waterproofing of the flat roof of the high-rise building and gray clouds racing off into the distance. The sky on the horizon began...
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Read MoreThe rain intensified and drummed loudly on the windows. Drops quickly penetrated the house through the poorly closed window and formed a rapidly spreading puddle on the floor. Entering the apartment and noticing this, Mikhail cursed and commanded irritably: “Turn...
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Read MoreIn a bar's outdoor beer garden,patrons mingle, talk politics,and eat sausagewhile downing beerbeneath an old oak's shade. Among them standsa sultry young woman,accustomed to turning headswherever she goes. Beside her mother,she surveys the crowd,catching the familiar glancesof men who notice her. Then,...
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I’m glad you liked it, Fia. Thanks. 🙂
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dearest Tim I hate women like that money grubbers trading their looks for cash prostitutes great write ❤️
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Thanks very much for the comment, Crimsin.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Another excellent write that speaks some truth my friend. Some marriages are more like business arrangements these days. Cold and transactional it would seem. Just my two cents brother. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
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Thanks so much for your thoughts, Damian. Always a pleasure to see you on my page.
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Tim you paint the scene and the sultry women with masterful brush strokes of description. This took me right into the scene so that I could see everything and the storytelling here is excellent. A really great poem that puts me right there and the slice of life here is tantalizing. Our former local coroner married a young lady who had a tryst with the pool boy and the coroner left his wife. As a woman told me he should have known at his age why she married him in the first place for his money. Loved this so much.
John
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Haha this is a good one and I like how you end it with the old saying.