Seductively dark, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hoi hoi
If I am listening well, I hear confirming hums…
If I am seeing well, I see all thumbs up from the fan-club…

Who am I to disagree? Most likely I’m part of the fan club.
Kind regards, Gus

Awesome writing, dear Crimsin! Tender and seductive as well as haunting from the depth of the abyss!

Complexity of desire. It’s ever so. 🖤

I love it!! Wonderfully constructed and passionately HOT!!

hello lovely Fia I know you are here for us…I comment a lot and people are responding…at du for a long time I was unpopular because of my schizo episodes and really I couldn’t help it…you would think I woudn’t write duringn those periods but oh no not me lol… thank you dear lady ❤️

I think we’re all thankful you’re here, Fia. I always try to comment on other poems when I can. That’s what makes this a community.

We all need you Fia… we all need one another… still you are one of a kind

Passionately penned, Fia. I always dig your musings my friend. Thank you for everything you do for our community. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Hoi hoi
I love it a lot how you care for us. And thank you so much for that.

But am I (being?) out of place when I ask for you to take more time to write goodies for yourself?

Think of the stewardess in a plane. They point out to first put that mask over your face and after that tend to other people.
I honestly believe the stewardess’ filosophy. And I hope that I can convince you to become a believer too. Wink wink.

Please don’t forget yourself.
Warm regards, Gus

I bow to you with gratitude for your tireless dedication to our community, dear Fia!
For many of us writing is an invaluable contribution to maintaining mental balance. Pouring out your heart in a poem or a story brings great relief and satisfaction.
I appreciate very much that you cover all topics with your writing. Literature must not be restricted in its freedom of expression!
Once again, thousands of thanks for all your efforts and your marvelous poetry, my friend!

With gratitude and appreciation, I thank you for all that you do and are, Fia. Fearless and honest, your writing inspires us to share parts of ourselves we might otherwise shove aside, forgotten. Thank you, my friend!

Clay

TY

Due to my feral childhood, manners were late being learned. So now I’m a relic from another time who opens doors for people and always says please and thank you. As it applies to writing, I always appreciate it when someone takes the time to read and comment on my work, and will always thank them. Your fine poem is much food for thought, and I embrace every word.

Peace to you Fia. You’ve been the core of this site. Your determination, passion and love for poetry, writing and the community here, does not go unnoticed. Keep up the great work you’ve done here on starsrite.

That’s how I feel. Poetry is our voice. So many people don’t use that voice or give it up. I know it can get discouraging but it can help someone. Also it just feels good to get those feelings out regardless of subject.

Wonderful write.

This was so perfectly executed that I can’t tell which is whose voice. Powerfully descriptive imagery,both of you 🙌

Wow! That was a very sensual reminiscence. You really brought the imagery here

Hoi hoi

Wow! If this isn’t a declaration of love, I don’t know what is.
What a beautiful write!
A great thing you posted it!

Kind regards, Gus

I enjoy writing about this type of memory. Thanks for reading! Always grateful for your visits and comments.

Loss of innocence written with impressionist imagery that captivate me as I read. Very well done indeed.

John

Exceptional ink my friend .. thank heaven for memories eh & of course for poetry .. Neville 😎👍

So beautiful, so dark, so you Brenda. Excellent piece my friend.

Redemption with a hollow scream. Love it, Brenda.

hello lovely one good evening thank you just a feeling that overcame me last night I wasn’t sure if I should write this I’m happy it worked for you ❤️

Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian