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Read MoreI looked for you down colorful aisles humming a song through five hundred miles I looked for you under two feet of snow hands frozen and blue why did you go I looked for you at January’s end will they blow out your...
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Thank you, Usha, for the read and comment. I also appreciate you sharing your culture with me, I am honored.
Clay
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This is beautiful and it did make me cry. This is a beautiful tribute.
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Thank you, Fia. I have been struggling to put things into words lately and am relieved it made sense. Thank you, again.
Clay
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Beautifully penned, Detritus. A heartfelt tribute my friend. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I likewise appreciate you and your consistent support.
Clay
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definitely more… crap… this touched me more than you think
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Ooo, did it now. Nice;)
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I love it when you skip the conventional, and just flow like spilt honey all over the page, Fia – encore! x
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Thank you Hjx
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Great use of words and rhymes. Awesome job here.
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Thank you ..I appreciate that Vision;))
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A sensual poem, written with the precision of a master key. Or should I say: Mistress key!
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Haha, thank you M.E;))
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Passionately penned, Fia. A very seductive write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 😊
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Oh damn! That’s some fierce wordplay there! You built that to perfection!
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Thank you Willow 😊
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Amazingly written.. I’m looking for more.. ☺️
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Haha thank you Christopher 😊
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Key
When did you get the key to my door
It’s been locked for so long
I remember when I put the bolt and nail it to the floor
Fear and hurt infused the metal like a song
You inserted a key
Turned it to the right
I stood before you
I the softest moonlight
You really looked at me
Realizing what I was w…Read More
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What a subtle erotic poem Fia. The key turns, oh the possibilities!! -Curt
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you. I wanted to play on using object as terms for intimacy
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This was touching to me. Tugged at my heart Fia.
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Thank you Brandon:))
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There’s a lot of people feeling like this these days, Fia. I can relate.
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Yes, there are. Thank you Tim:))
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Excellent write Fia …straight from your heart into mine.
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Thank you Peter;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write that gives me musing vibes my friend. You know how I dig your musings. Amazing work as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Yes definitely a musing vibe cuz. Thank you Damian 😊
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This is very real. Truthful and strangely uplifting.
Regards
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Thank you, Knight;))
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That last line is a stone dropping into the pond. Solid slap of reality. Doesn’t stop us reaching, does it?
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No it doesn’t. We keep going. Thank you Willow 😊
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Seagulls
The cry of seagulls
Has me longing to return
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Hi,
A heartfelt thoughts that really touched me. I can see how deeply you are connected her. Parents are Gods, in Hindu mythology we pray and bow to three beings who shaped our life and made us,
Mathru devobhava
Pithru devobhava
Acharya devobhava
Mother father and teacher are equal to God and we seek their blessings and they have invested whole their life in making us.
Thank you for your beautiful lines about your mom.
Jessy Jacob ❤️