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thank you graciously dearest Damian I was listening to a song called Lilith by Peter Grundy when I wrote this ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian for embracing me in this write ❤️
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Read MoreHey girl.You’re about 21,your life has just begun.And still,your smile doesn’t reach your eyes.Maybe, you’ve gotten wise;or maybe you realizedthat you don’t know where you’re going.you’ve got two kids that you’re toting;Life is hard.You’re in school and working two...
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You always find yourself when you don’t realize it.
23 sounded like a good year of life for you!-
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Yeah, I’d say that it was. Thank you for reading six. xx
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Beautifully penned, PG. Excellent write with a very powerful message. Writing is therapy I agree with you completely. No matter how creative I get with a poem or lyrics there is always a therapeutic quality even as simple as getting something off my chest. Very relatable piece lets me know I’m not alone in the world. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I love that we can turn such pain into such beauty with the art of our choice.. there really is something poetic about it, ironically. Lol.
Thanks for reading my friend. xx
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PG
When the darkness surrounds you and you think of the unthinkable remember this.
You have to be alive to find peace.Death just brings death.
Now you take care and keep writing.🙏💋🙏
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Promise to keep on, keeping on! Thanks Peter. xx
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This is powerful and the images and words are delicately constructed. Always move forward PG, never look back. Well written.
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The pain I’ve endured has always been a stark reminder that I’m alive. I’m grateful for that.. always moving forward. Thank you, Vision. xx
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Great piece. There’s also a hidden but great message in here. Yes, kick your kids out of the nest. But let them know if pressure builds, if the world becomes to much, the door opens both ways and they’re always welcome. So many people commit the acts that they do, endure the abuse that they do because they have no where’s to return to
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Your muse has the answer of your being, so continue to let the words flow and live as you dream…but don’t any wooden nickels, are flying monkeys.
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Read MoreMy mind is a mess,and usually i’m pretty organized.But today is a day of darkness,no more sunny skies.It’s mostly cloudy, the world’s gone gray.Would it be worse, if I asked you to stay?I don’t want to be in my...
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I love this because, the dark is my friend when scribbling. The dark is an embryo in the womb of the mind. Keep on, getting on with your writing.
Atticus Abbey/Adagio
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Very well expressed. It is a well-felt plea that we all can relate to. Your version is precise and captures the feelings well.
Now cheer up! 😉-
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Thank you! All good here now. xx
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Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. Your plea is so authentic and real, and your reading expresses the emotional element of the words themselves. We all face self-doubt and our vulnerability escapes through our deepest fears sometimes. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is one captivating write. the audio and image give this a wonderful, short story vibe. Well said. Today is Wednesday and your alive…smile.
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I take that as a high honor coming from you a gifted writer ❤️
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Chère C.,
You tag it love.
And that’s what I wish for you.
Heaps and heaps of love.
Warm regards, Gus-
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hello dearest Gus this is a song I like and I think it correct about love thank you my friend ❤️
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Chère C.,
Love your write and your choice of music.
This is 12 years old and I didn’t know it, so I’m really glad you suggested it.This is so close to my music, that it gives me the courage to ask if i can put one of your poems to music one day.
Please don’t be scared. I’ll do nothing without your full OK. OK?
Have a wonderful thursday!
Warm regards, Gus-
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I would love that dearest Gus I would be deeply honored ❤️
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Hoi hoi
I’d be deeply honored if you would like the results.
Have a nice weekend!
Warm regards, Gus
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Stirring the cauldron with a naked glue that sticks to the dark.
Atticus Abbey
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hello dearest Adagio thank you graciously for a wonderfully poetic comment ❤️
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You are very welcome.
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Love the layers in this powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian