Life is not always the way one envisions it.

Powerfully penned, Lizz. A very heavy write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Iv tried Neither of those worked because he never left bruises. People seem to think that it’s easy to get out of iv tried to leave and was stupid enough to come back.

Nope I don’t talk to much of my brothers and I think I let my closest brother down and what he done for my it put his life on the line so now because of that I’m already getting ready to leave and now summer is coming I don’t mind being on the street for a while.

This is great erotica.

Very well written and a little arousing.
🫦

I loved the her/him perspective.
Erotic FINGERS touch. Erotic TOES curl. “)

Thank you 😊 I do try to do both perspectives and maybe a Duet given it turns out good

Passionately penned, Lizz. Amazing erotica this is a very steamy write my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

Chère L.,
The way I read it, is that the erotic part is unmistakably there. And it is wonderful.

But the deeply felt/feld part that is human, is up front.

This is love more than anything else.
What a write!
Truly love it to bits!

Please, keep those poems coming.
Warm regards, Gus

Powerfully penned, Lizz. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Nailed it in such few words😘

Well written! I should try these more.

I’ve never tried this!
I’m intrigued.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Pretty cool. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

I remember seeing gulls in a Costco parking lot in Denver once and being surprised. A long way from the ocean, they were. I wonder if they ever missed the silence of the sea. Great haiku…I can’t seem to get the hand of writing them myself