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Read MoreThe door slammed behind me, indicating that the chief must have decided I was in the wrong and her incompetent rookie was in the right.“What the hell were you doing coming in the back way? You are no longer...
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading my story;))
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how you repeat that couplet at the end. It wraps everything up in a neat package. This is a really cool piece with sociopathic undertones which catch my attention. I love an unreliable narrator. I love an evil genius. A lot of women do… the bad boy syndrome. Boys grow up to be devils. And girls… well, sometimes we invite them in.
Nice piece!
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I really appreciate you for shining your light on this.
A man’s (in this case) internal struggle in such a situation has always intrigued me, yet is beyond alien to me at the same time.
I love exploring my uncharted territory.
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Once again you’re a great storyteller and I always enjoy the dialogue you write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Your writing shines. Excellent as always!
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Thank you, Keith;))
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Read MoreOnly In My Dreams✨In sleepy dreams of kindred spirits wed …it’s these I run to, chasing through the night.Before my eyes are closed, such dreams are spreadtogether, heart and soul ~ in fevered flight.Live thee, but naught lost...
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The longing in this is palpable. Very beautiful writing.
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Thank you, Alexandria 🙏🏼
Most gratefully for selecting this rather wishfully gentle poem in homage to unrequited desire.
How wonderfully encouraging it is to know you were able to actually feel the emotion of this piece.Your gracious praise gratifies a bard’s humble efforts! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Thank you, Alexandria 🙏🏼
Most gratefully for selecting this rather wishfully gentle poem in homage to unrequited desire.
How wonderfully encouraging it is to know you were able to actually feel the emotion of this piece.Your gracious praise gratifies a bard’s humble efforts! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Maybe so, Adira,
But, not quite as beautiful as You for sharing this rather lovely homage to romantic fate, with your ohhh-so warmly kindred spirit.
What would you want that you cannot have, right now?
One can only wonder and ponder ‘n wish! ⁓ Rascal🖌️
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Your a great storyteller Fia. Nice work!!