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Read MoreHome is where you are chipping the stoneto grave applause a look in the eyeswhen the lights go down awake to crouching (sure) ~the stars are not right for a place in.betweendilated paranoia, a mawkish glassfor snorting pastwith a...
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Read MoreBlood in: so daft in my grave, a fresh-cut flesh-nutslips & falls into proverbial groove through an open vein- this sleepaway cavecraved awakeon chords of lightthrough ancient rowswhere I soak my cellsin the green sereneslurping gasoline a break from thoseunblinking high beam ~eyes at nonsense rituals cleaving clean: this all-seeing dreamwinked at...
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Rock on, Love this crimsin
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thank you graciously beautiful Fia I just love him ❤️
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Fantastic!
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thank you graciously dearest Adagio for being here my attention in the site was waning due to lack of interaction… I appreciate you deeply today ❤️
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I love the rock god!!!
So many great lines in this but I absolutely love flame of fright!!
Cheers to the darkness!-
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hi beautiful Adelphina thank you so much I felt like I was hitting my flow by that time I’m glad you liked it ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Always a great write when music is involved in the story. Excellent work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian yes he is an inspiration thank you for digging it ❤️
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I love the commanding voice in this poem! It isn’t a passive admirer; she’s a “Mistress,” an active conjurer of lust. The use of words like “Hexaba,” “culted lust,” and “sanctify the rite with orgasm” is brilliant for creating that sense of forbidden, consuming desire. A passionate wicked piece.
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hello lovely poetess good evening thank you graciously for the love on this write ❤️
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Rob Fuckin Zombie Brenda!! Have you ever listened to White Zombie’s early material from the 1980’s? I personally think it’s horrible. Check it out if you haven’t. Awesome piece of writing. Love the chick…Sexy!!
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hi dearest Keith forgive me for missing your comment thank you my friend ❤️
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Really intense images.
I definitely saw a scene of the occult unfolding in these words.I both admire and fear witches.
Regards James
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he dearest James good morning thank you and don’t worry I’m not a practising witch though magic seems to come naturally from me have a good day today ❤️
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A wonderful write Crimsin. I hope you have a spectacular day this day.
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hello dearest Bat thank you graciously for the love on this ❤️
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This gives me the scene of a poet upon a stage, reciting their words to an eager crowd. I have a feeling that reciting it makes it stronger. A voice that knows where the bullets go.
Strong write. Awesomely done.