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hello dearest John bittersweet is love in my view thank you for the love on this ❤️
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Never got to read your writing….just couldn’t get past the image of that stunning woman you provided….lol
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hello dearest Benny yes she is stunning I was looking for a more mature woman to go with the poem thank you for your response I spend a lot of time for the right images ❤️
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Lovely, Brenda. Better to let go sometimes. Lovely!
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thank you graciously dearest Daniel I never really let go though ❤️
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enjoy your time… you deserve it
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Thank you, Sam;) <3
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what the heck is <3???… oh wait never mind… it is "love" … damn im getting old
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hello beautiful Fia you are so lovely enjoy your time ❤️
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Thank you, crimsin 😊
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What a smashing bit o poetry you pinned here .. muchly enjoyed .. Oh’ n while I’m here, have a well deserved break .. Neville
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Thank you Neville ☺️
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Have fun!!!!!
And great work!-
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Thank you Bobbington ☺️
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Recharge the batteries, Fia. Enjoy your vacation, Cuz. You definitely deserve it.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ☺️
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Go get the break you more than earned! We promise not to burn the place down in your absence. Seriously though, enjoy your Me Time!
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Thank you, Willow 😊
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I work a lot so when I get time I just want to post as much as possible haha. It can be rather addictive.
Great ink
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Drieks wrote a new post
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Read MoreBlood drips slow from the ceilingOh it tastes like rustHead's poundingSirens screamingMy mind’s combustCops poundingThe door’s caving in“Where were you” they shout“where’ve you been”I’m blankI’m hollowThe reel won’t playNo pastNo shadowJust a foggy grayIron tastes like memoryBitter and coldQuestions...
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This has a surreal aspect to it. The iron tasting like memory is brilliant. Mind sees blood
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Thank you Willow 🙏🏻
Your words truly mean a lot to me.
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Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Phenomenal lyrics my friend especially that chorus, love the drive of the musical arrangement, the beat is almost trance like. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian! 🙏🏻
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This is awesome! I’m sorry I’m late to this post!!
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Thank you so much Adelphina! It really means a lot to me.
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I can’t thank you enough for your beautiful words. I am pretty bad at accepting compliments so bare with me.
Also, english is not my native language so if I say something that doesn’t make much sense, I apologize!But thank you for saying all this to me. Truly.
And no, I do not realize I help people through my words but it is really nice to think I can/do.❤️
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What depravity does the rip tide take you to..
This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
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hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously ❤️have a great night…
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian it’s so good to see you I thought we lost you thank you graciously❤️
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Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡
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hrllo beartiful Willow thank you graciously❤️
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Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.
John
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hello dearest John good evening I am blushing from your beautiful comment thank you graciously ❤️
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Fia Naturie and
NAVINA are now friends
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Sorrowfully beautiful. Truly artistry in language that flows all the way until the end. You have a talent with words that is exquisite even in its sorrow. Fine art here, my friend.
John