This is sweet and insightful. If only people could see the reflection in the mirror. Do onto others as you would like them to do onto you. (I remember some school teaching)

Ich liebe es, Elke! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Beautifully penned, Elke. You’re a gifted storyteller my friend, really enjoyed this. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Such a sweet and uplifting tale.
You are a wonder with so many diverse styles.

Thank you very much for reading and writing such a lovely comment, my friend!

An excellent story, to remember.

I enjoy fables, folk tales, fantasy and the like, and so I enjoyed this quite a lot. I wish this dervish could visit all around the world and teach people to behave better.

Yes you are right, Sam! The earth could be a wonderful place, if we worked together and took good care of one another and the whole planet.
Thank you very much for reading and commenting!

Beautifully penned, Benjamin. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I can see why it was nominated. It has a dreamy and faraway quality to it.

I always think unicorn is code for a secret society this made me feel God himself was talking to me just beautiful…

I brow my spells
in leafy black-green
where sullen moons
sulk in pretty-pink

love it 💕

I was raised around poetry books, and my dad liked to dabble in it late at night. My oldest sister too, had books around, and hers were more what developed my tastes. Like this write of yours. It reminds me of old Dylan. I don’t know why. yet that’s a good thing to key my old memories of reading his stuff.
You sir, are a poet. Not just a writer. an actual poet. And that is a very good thing.