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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk6 Comments-
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I am going to. By next week it should be better.
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I hope so … the topic is very interesting, if you can get it into proper Sonnet format. : )
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I’m trying
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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okay
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
OUR FIRST ’BACK TO POETRY BASICS’ SESSION:
“LEARNING & UNDERSTANDING THE ENGLISH SONNET”
by Richard W. Jenkins
© 22 Oct, 2025DETAILS OF THE ENGLISH [Shakespearean] SONNET
(taking notes for reference is a very good idea)A bit of interesting and awakening study is ahead, but it will be for this first time only in order to fami…Read More
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Thanks for the Likes! 🤓
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. A powerful dark write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you for the love here it’s deeply appreciated ❤️
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My word, you really have entered into the spirit of this most hauntingly chilling time of year .. Bravo & likewise awarded the 🖤 of horror .. Kindest Regards, Neville 😎👍
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hello dearest Neville dark writing is a thing of mine I’m happy you enjoyed this…I always write what is on my mind I think it’s nightmares thank you for the great comment ❤️
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not only cool but my guilty pleasure .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🖤🖤🐧😎👍
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lol I’m glad thank you ❤️
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that feels like it could be a win win .. ❤️
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Well, this makes me think of a fallen angel, caught in the dilemma of righteousness and vengence. By the grace of God, perhaps, yet there is an underlying energy here too. I like the whirlwind of thoughts going on here. I can sense your struggle through your words, quite easily. Well expressed Crimson.
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hello dearest Styxian good evening you know how it is as a writer and you have something on your mind and even if you don’t really want to you have to get it out… thank you I deeply appreciate your interpretation it’s just how my mind works…I guess this goes along the lines of serial killers they always say they are doing the work of God and really who is to say they are wrong? ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I’m happy you like it I liked the way it came out ❤️
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Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.