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Read MoreIt's been locked away for so longYou're asking me to allow you the keyTo push open the door that's so strongLetting you see what can never beDo you hear the thud, thud, thudDo you know what it could beDo...
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Read More. . . S i m p a t i c o . . .It’s written, "Those who don’t care whywill never know what’s realnor find compatibility,but only to conceal."Conceal what’s true within their heartsthat share what others might,such peace of mind and sanitythat comes with great insight.Insight...
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Greetings, Adira 🥀
Thank you for your time taken to read and review this rather poignant piece in homage to a failed romance.
The verse you’ve selected to highlight (I think) is the core of this work … good eye and insight in understanding it’s significance.Your praise inspires me, too … hugs! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Read MoreFunny how I do feel like a pawn,before this now setting dawn.Each day over before it has begun,eclipsed by a forever waning sun. Just another creature of the night,sealed in tight within the write,treading water in all of this ink,struggling...
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Dear S.
Oddly, this poem made me hopeful. I don’t even know why. Maybe this; I know you worked well and hard to make this poem and while you were doing it, you may have felt it relieve your sorrow and emptiness. Am I wrong? If I’m lucky, when I’m low and have the freedom to write, if I’m not put upon by some duty or demand and I find few words to write, it frees me a bit from my palatable discord. Is this it?
Thanks for writing this.
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This poem gives me a feeling that the writer is tired but will continue their plight on putting words on the page. Nice;))
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Powerfully penned, LDF. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreG i r l ⁓Flows slowly smooth, cool crystal rills,chaste wonders form a young girl's truth.Ripples flowing, sun’s spark’ling glints …pure innocence ~ sweet thoughts of youth.Softly satin, her innocence,through eyes that tenderness conveys;thoughts...
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This is sweet. You capture innocence seen on a young girl from a males pov. Enjoyed this
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Thank you sincerely, Fia 🌾
I’m so very pleased you found favor and enjoyment in this poetically masculine version of a few moments in a young girl’s blossoming.
Your words inspire me.
Hugs ‘n happy blessings! ⁓ Richard🍃
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian