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    Dystopia

    They built this shiny cellFor you to live inAdorned with their iconsPainted with their liesThey don`t trick meFor I am not like youYou`re a robotLiving in MetropolisThey paved this golden pathFor you to followYour grave is waiting onStep by...

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    Bloodfeast

    It's all for Ishtar, the sacrifice will soon be completeHe needs to find a virgin, for his Egyptian bloody feast He's gonna rip out her tongue, slice off her face, gouge out her eyesThe blood will continue to flowWhen it...

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    Beowulf Pt.2

      I asked her what his name was, then dropped the silver on the floor screaming itHis mother burst into a hysterical laugh, hoping that she was dreaming itI should had seen the resemblance, I should had been a better...

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    • Nope we have to keep others reading and enjoying, we want you entertained Lady. Thanks

    • This is a magnificent addition to the Beowulf legend. Truly fine storytelling. You really wrote this elegantly and an in grand mythical style. This had me riveted to the screen as I read. I love ancient myth and this is a fine example of a modern writer expanding on a mythical theme.

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      • Thank you sir, we also like myths and legends. We hope to continue with writes such as these

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    Beowulf

      I, I am Beowulf a God among menAdventurer of a many exploits, my beginnings touches my endsMy existence began so far away, in the dark recesses of a country townAcross an ocean and hidden behind a mountain range, no...

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    • The shock of discovering you killed your own. That is a horrible way to find out. I like how you wove this tale.

      • Think of Oedipus and the final realization after you impregnate you own mom, hahaha, life is mythology and visa versa at times. Thanks Lady

    • One of our favorite pieces and movies and to put it in a different era the kids may read this, thank you Lady

    • This is an awesomely told tale my friend. You have the story tellers gift for taking an ancient story and breathing into it a fresh perspective that is so invigorating to read. You engage the reader with suspense and then that explosive ending. I too thought of Oedipus when that ending came. A worthy addition to the myth.

      John

    • We really appreciate your reading and comment, much respect

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