Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. I like the way certain lines contradict one another. Nice touch. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Benny for the most part I cannot connect with people as they only offer the surface I hear this well written and deeply felt poem ❤️

Thanks folks

Ohh the passion in the write and the meaning touched me.

A highly entertaining, fantastic story, told in your unique style. I found myself wishing my youngest grandkids could be hearing you. Disney studios should learn about you.