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Read Morewilt the truth, bring honesty upon me, oh giver of judgementsentence my soul and be done with mein the darkness, kept silentupon my honor I am chastised of a brutal fashionseeker of wisdomwho in my hour of need did...
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Mysterious, dark and intriguing. Great piece of poetry Brenda.
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hello dearest Keith thank you graciously ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. An excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I appreciate you ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Read MoreI. I lent wings to the boy-angel, or something like wings and he tried to fly, or something close to it, or maybe fly later, but the sky kept freezing, freezing, and he kept saying “I’m going up, going down, resending,” like a clause...
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You know this is quasi-brilliant. It’s like an updated bible of sorts. Not so much religious as it is of the human conditioning of limitations. Truly an outstanding piece of writing.
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I’ve being trying my best lately, thank you for the read and comments.
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Cleverly penned, PAR. This piece is brilliantly written my friend. Truly amazing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Brother, thank you for the read and comments.
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This piece has become liturgically and surgically well-constructed.
I don’t believe in angels, but they do exist. Thank you all. -
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PAR you are a great writer. Always pushing the envelope with your poetry. Nice work.
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You’re the best, Keith!
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I loved how quirky this is. I kept wondering where the next passage would go.
And it does have a comic newborn superhero feel to it with all the attempts at flying.
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Thank you a lot, poets know all the attempts at flying.
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Magically penned, Brenda. A truly amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian