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    Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month

    he knows the sound of my breath
    as it catches
    hovering over his words
    like a hummingbird
    imbibing
    on the intoxicating nectar
    of his expression

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    Whispered Intensity

    he knows the sound of my breath as it catches hovering over his words like a hummingbird  imbibing on the intoxicating nectar of his expression

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    • This tells the reader what you mean but with finesse. Love it

      • Thank you 😊 It was stupid o’clock in the morning so it’s short, but it says what’s important to me

    • For some reason I was compelled to read this from beginning to end, and then reverse from the end to the beginning. The choice of words in this hook the reader so well. Short yes, but sweet. And done with skill and vivid imagery.

    • Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! This a magnificent little write here my friend. I mean I really dig the wordplay and imagery. Next level good. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • This one had a lot to say with just a few words. I just went with what I felt. Thank you, my friend 😊

  • A little dream

    Clouds rolling in softly
    Delicately like a purr
    Wrapped in warm cotton
    Trailing thoughts of a time of tenderness

    Inner eye awakens to a place
    Where safety is given
    Love is freely accepted
    And a genuine smile is cherished

    Let me not wake from this
    Wanting to hold and be held
    In a world of nonreality
    Let me have…Read More

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    Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month

    for the first time
    words
    sworn
    never to be spoken

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    l
    l

    from desperate lips
    what loss is there?
    compared
    to freedom
    of hope
    l i s t e n i n g…Read More

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    Inner Shine

    All three ponds filled up,
    Two ducks wade through the speckled
    Buttercup sunshine.
    Even as nighttime settles
    Flowers hold onto daylight.

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