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    Our Tranquil Flame

    The voiceless tranquility of our flame, our souls searing with passion still, yearning an isolation as silent as our emotions.    This flameless romance, this desert - Windswept of all fertility, populous with negativity.    a fondness for solitude now, I withdraw from her as I say, ”Where I’m...

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    New Love

    She came in quiet,black tights hugging her legs,a grey sweatshirt draping low,her laughter stitched in caricaturesof friends she’d left behind in school.Beneath it, a whisper of color,blue-green, soft against her skin.No bra,her breasts, so small,yet to him, they were...

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    • A firestorm of beauty and passion as I read and this unfolded. Tenderly written with exquisite attention to the encounter told both emotionally and physically in a dance. Loved reading this.

      John

      • Thanks for appreciating the dance…and taking time to leave a comment; I am grateful.

    • Hoi hoi
      Hope this finds you well.

      I’ve always thanked the forces, liberating us from the
      Love
      Love me do
      You
      Know
      I love you
      Tyranny.

      Looking back his Bobness only went half way…
      Beautiful writes like this one do the rest.
      Thank you for writing and posting.
      Kind regards, Gus

      • Gus…thanks for the kind comment. I’ll always be true.

    • A tendering, trembling new love indeed. Everyone can relate to this piece. Wonderfully done, RPM! Into the list it goes!

    • You can beat a drum and an egg of course but you just can’t beat a nice bit of gentle well stated erotica .. Neville

    • Ooh, love that comment. Thanks a bunch!

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    A White Petal

    I have fallen in love with her,and I cannot stop my feelings. A rose blooms in our bed,blooming from a rainy summer. A white petal had fallen onto the bedcover,I picked it up, smelled it,and rubbed it on her lips.She still...

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    • Loved this so much Daniel. Enchanting and artfully crafted. I was mesmerized as the scene unfolded through your words.

      John

    • Beautifully penned, Daniel. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Venus

    You rise in the twilight for I too bask in the dark. While I desire the burning day star, I thrive in the night.   You are ornamented with hues of Hell, Heaven, lust, and purity. I embellish the hues of an angel’s velvety...

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    • This read for me as an emotional sensual journey with such poignancy at the end. Truly deeply felt poetry at its finest.

      John

    • Passionately penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I felt the burning of this piece. Well done!

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    Time

    You think I don't care I care too much You think I'm not here I'm here in the cuts When you reach out your hand I took it in mine I don't understand Why can't I take some time I won't be gone long I doubt you’ll even...

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