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Read MoreHe goes to the same job everyday.He comes home to his wife every night.They rarely touch each other.Only on special occasions, like birthday's and July 4th.There not attracted to each other anymore.They don't make a fuss about it.A few...
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Thanks Damian.
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Thank you Adira. Reality is painful for most. Appreciate the feedback!
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Can actually relate to this. Sadly. I feel my fiance and I no longer really love each other, not even any attraction exists. While I was reading your piece here, I felt my creative, poetic juices flowing and if I dont have any more purpose with her, then poetry and story writing will become my purpose in life. You write a simple piece, yet totally thought provoking. Bravo!
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Thanks man. I keep my writing simple, always. Many relationships go sour. It’s a very difficult thing to stay loyal and happy with that one person for the rest of your life. Stay creative Daniel. Wish you the best with your relationship.
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Read MoreAbout 15 years ago I was watching the local news. One of the main stories was of a young man aged 20 being murdered. Not by a criminal, or his friends, but by the police.The boy who had mental...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This is a sad one my friend. Pulls at these old heartstrings. Unfortunately, you’re completely right this happens far too often. 9 shots 5 cops. Somebody shot more than once. Powerful message brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It does. Many thanks for being the brave soul to read and comment.
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Read MoreWelcome Backstage, I’m Damian DeadLove. Tonights band has a very interesting story on writing a song that far exceeded expectations of what it’s initial purpose was. I’m talking about Britain’s own, Black Sabbath. Often credited as one of the forefathers...
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That’s super fascinating history, Damian. I don’t really follow Black Sabath, but I am familiar with that particular tune. I’m stunned that Ozzy never wrote lyrics. The dude was super fortunate to hang around people who did.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, DK. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. He attempted to write a few lyrics, but they were never standout lyrics. Plus he was fortunate enough to have guys around that could write lyrics. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sabbath is one of the most influential bands on earth. Whether you like Ozzy or Dio or Tony Martin, All of their line ups are special. Except the last album they did titled “13”. That’s pure shit!!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. I agree, each lineup had its appeal. “13” was not that great. Especially when in comparison with the last record they did with RJD. Under the “Heaven & Hell” moniker. That was a killer album. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I never knew that about Ozzy. I always loved how unapologetic he was. He was just being him and that is that.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you liked the story my friend. Yeah, he attempted writing lyrics a couple of times. He’s no Geezer Butler. However he did write the vocal melodies. I’m a fan of him, that’s just the facts when it comes to what he contributes to songwriting. Appreciate you.
Damian
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So another case of the unexpected stealing the show & in this case, saving the day! Maybe record labels should start letting the music makers do their thing & see much it nets their infamous gawdawful bottom line. Gah…another intriguing story, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. Very true, but the business men and bean-counters think they know best. It’s always up to the talent to save the day. There are more to come my friend, glad you love the series. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreA man just recently had his license reinstated. He failed to pay child support for his 7 year old kid. He needed to go to the DMV and get everything back on track. The man was approached by a...
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I read your short stories like a quick fix for some watching a disturbing movie or reading a depressing novel. Am I alright?
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Questions that need answers because same here lol
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Yes. Like What are you doing here? Let me question my sanity alone. Lol
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I have more fucked up stuff on the burner. Be ready.
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Wow, I need a Valium. That was hugely disturbing.
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Appreciate it.
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Vision, I can always look forward to you doing my head in. xx
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Thanks P.G! Love the comments.
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Disturbingly penned, Keith. This was quite dark my friend, but you always deliver a great read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate it Damian.
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Read MoreThey were married for a very long timeMinimal love for one anotherBoth daydreamed about the perfect crime. A poor swimmer she was at bestHe thought of submerging her deepAn expeditious agonizing death. He enjoyed her cooking and anything she madeShe thought...
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I have seen a slightly similar movie. I can’t remember which to put in the comment. Well penned!
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Thanks man. Appreciate the comments.
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So, in the end, they took each other out. Irony.
In the series called “Ozark”, something similar happened between a husband and wife. They were both plotting to kill each other. He took a knife on their walk, but the arsenic she dropped in his coffee got him first.-
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Never watched Ozark. Sounds lovely. Thanks Dampkitten
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THANK You! I have been looking for where I have seen something similar. Ozark. What a good show!
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Yeah, Keith. You would totally appreciate the series, I guarantee it. Pretty captivating and intense.
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Moooorral of the story?? Trust no one, not even your spouse. Noted lol once again, you’ve blown my mind. Great work xx
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Don’t trust anyone. Not even yourself! Thanks P.G. You rock!!!!
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Means a lot coming from you xx
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Brilliantly penned, Keith. A real match made in hell my friend. Great storytelling. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man. Appreciate it.
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Happens more than most would think. Powerfully penned, Keith. Great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian